Irene Was the American Girl

Irene was the American girl,
the only pretty one I should have based my romantic story on;
and that story is still unwritten...
not having been able to forget the rejection that turned into pain. 
Two bright and respectful kids we were,
growing up with Bob Dylan's intellectual poetry,
but mine was the waltz of a beautiful song...
with the words of the truest love I had ever written.
Brown and blue eyes would have made green eyes,
blonde and brown hair would have made auburn hair;
nothing but the handsomest boy or even the prettiest girl...
for us to love and proudly share for many happy years ahead. 

But who has been your darling since then?
Have you found tenderness in that man?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Congrats Andrew on your HM in the contest with this lovely vivid poetry my friend..enjoy honor...
Johnson Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 10:48 PM
What a shame it was not to be Andrew. Her mistake. I love your poem and congratulations. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 10:56 AM
Congrats on your HM, Andy. Nice going. Ralph
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 10:12 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian Strand's contest "Aspects Of Love" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 10:04 PM
Andrew , I am glad to know you are a fellow Stephen King fan! This poem is very interesting. It reminds me of the times I reflected on lost loves,like in my No Words poem. It really does stay with your forever. And you always wonder. .. . (but maybe the blue and brown would have just made brown. haha! My mom's hazel and dad's blue eyes made four green eyed girls!!!) Good writing! andrea
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January 11, 2010 at 6:06 PM
sad and romantic, I just watched liscence to wed-It was funny and kinda sad.
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