Iranian Corrosion

Iranian Corrosion

A sense of old age, a sense of corrosion. 
All of this nasty metal, when you touch it, 
it makes a weird noise. 
You can feel it all over the city. 
Every metal object is corroded.
And in this city of metal 
even the people are corroded. 
You can feel the humidity 
getting into your body.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 16, 2015 at 12:44 PM
incredible piece! Keeping on giving us such lovely lines. #7. Happy weekend
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