Ion

Flatlined dissections erupt dissention dodeca mention falsified tensions entangled.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 28, 2010 at 7:41 PM
Hi Dan...you know I always try to help with a critique & BOY have I gotten in hot water for it but I wanted to tell you I agree...if we can't get an honest appraisal of our work here why are we posting? So please soup mail me whenever you want ...an opinion! As to the verse above...ready...drum roll....I have NO idea what you were going for? LOL Dieing ends the discussion? it would....Light & Love
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