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How still is our stillness, if thoughts present shrouding thus the divine love vibration within our radiant heart resident Oh hermit, feel within, the bliss current by entering the void of cessation How still is our stillness, if thoughts present Discarding feral ego sediment we light the flame of loving elation within our radiant heart resident Recognising God as omnipresent we feel His breath close, in each sensation How still is our stillness, if thoughts present, Boundless is presence, self-luminescent love and light beyond imagination within our radiant heart resident Our spiritual ascent is instant if the flow of life be celebration How still is our stillness, if thoughts present, within our radiant heart resident 16-April-2021

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Date: 4/16/2021 8:57:00 AM
This is a lovely villanelle, Unseeking Seeker. You have expressed yourself with vivid imagery and artfully used the format. Loved it! Of course, I'm a fan of the villanelle!
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Date: 4/16/2021 9:08:00 AM
Thanks to your sponsoring a contest in this format, I was introduced to villanelle. Trying to get the hang of it with a few ‘practice poems’ :)

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