Chris Green Poet Free verse

Inviting Forever

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Even if moonlight is broken
and wild flowers bloom
beneath a stolen sun
lost in a dawning song,
sung in off key silhouettes
along a chorale reef
drenched in caramel pages
of forgotten ink...

amidst an ocean’s marathon,
waving to popsicle patrons,
melting your smile
in every sweetness now
clinging to shirt tails
of written directions
leading away…

we will find our place
deep within the twilight secrets
on the crest of a 
November whisper
among the hidden forests
and daffodil daydreams…

as evening swirls in
enchanting vistas
painted the color of your eyes,
where lingering stardust 
serenades melodically call
in the echoes of our hearts

inviting forever
to become
one with our love

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Line Gauthier November 27, 2019 at 7:55 AM Back with congrats on your POTD, Chris. Superbly penned. Chris Green November 27, 2019 at 8:38 AM Thank you my friend for all of the kindness you show me.

Gershon Wolf November 26, 2019 at 3:32 PM Somehow I missed out on this gem. Congrats on POTD, Chris! Cheers, Gershon Chris Green November 26, 2019 at 3:44 PM Whatever, you know you were just ignoring me. :) just kidding, thanks so much my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong November 24, 2019 at 3:02 PM So very lovely Chris and worthy of the honor of having a chosen as POTD! Congratulations my friend. : ) xxoo Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:26 AM Thank you so very much Connie.

Winged Warrior November 24, 2019 at 9:39 AM Late Congrats!! my friend on POTD!!...silky smooth wording Chris...you are a master at this...all the best...^WW^ :o) Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:26 AM Thanks so much my friend.

Brenda Chiri November 24, 2019 at 2:50 AM Congrats on potd!;) Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:25 AM Thank you Brenda

Brandy Nicole November 23, 2019 at 10:09 PM Oh my!! I am breathless. This is so beautiful and romantic. Your thoughts whisper softly upon my heart, a melody that lingers for always. Tender moments to caress. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:25 AM Thank you so very much Brandy. :)

Bobby May November 23, 2019 at 4:44 PM Well done Chris no surprise though, Congratulations on POTD your words always speak magic Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:24 AM Thanks so very much Bobby.

Midnight Aurora November 23, 2019 at 2:05 PM I'm not surprised that this is POTD. It truly is exceptional. Congrats on the honour, Chris. Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:24 AM Thank you so very much MA. I appreciate your nice comment

Eve Roper November 23, 2019 at 12:53 PM Fantastic write , Chris, I love the descriptive imagery .. Congratulations on POTD very well deserved …. Hugs Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:23 AM Thank you Eve for your kind thoughts

Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2019 at 12:45 PM - I love this from top to bottom ... congratulations on well deserved p.o.t.d., Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:23 AM Thank you so very much my friend.

Heidi Sands November 23, 2019 at 12:28 PM Congratulations for your well deserved POTD Chris :) Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:23 AM Thank you Heidi for your kindness.

Sandra Adams November 23, 2019 at 9:43 AM congratulations Chris on your POTD.... your poetry always shines... most if not all of your poetry is deserving of the honor ... hugs Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:22 AM Thank you my friend for always being so nice to me.

Na Na November 23, 2019 at 8:50 AM Congrats on POTD Chris well deserved. Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:22 AM Thanks so much Greg.

Tania Kitchin November 23, 2019 at 7:12 AM Chris, congratulations on POTD with your enchantingly beautiful romantic poem! Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:21 AM Thanks so very much Tania.

Jennifer Proxenos November 23, 2019 at 6:51 AM Chris, this is a masterpiece - congratulations on POTD - a talented write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:21 AM Thank you for your kind words Jennifer.

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 23, 2019 at 6:45 AM Simply the best from a master of romantic poetry! Kudos on POTD, Chris. Love and more love always. Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:21 AM Thanks a bunch Freddie.

Alexis Y. November 23, 2019 at 6:35 AM WoW! Chris, This is so romantic and dreamy. The content and imagery is just breathtaking. I see why you got such an honor . Congratulations on the poem of day. It was well deserved. Have a great weekend my friend:-) Alexis Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:20 AM Thank you so very much my friend.

Vijay Pandit November 23, 2019 at 6:31 AM Superb write, as always--congrats Chris on poem of the day--you are a gifted poet! Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:19 AM Thanks Vijay, I appreciate it.

Edward Ibeh November 23, 2019 at 5:55 AM Simply sublime, Chris:-) You're such a gifted poet. Heartiest congratulations on your POTD recognition! Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:19 AM Thank you so very much Edward.

Regina Mcintosh November 23, 2019 at 5:23 AM Another poem to love by you... Congrats and blessings, Gina Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:18 AM Thank you Gina for your kind words.

Tom Cunningham November 23, 2019 at 5:06 AM You certainly set the standard for composing free verse Chris. Congrats on POTD. Tom. Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:18 AM Thanks so very much Tom.

Line Gauthier November 22, 2019 at 7:45 AM I like your deliberate use of the word chorale and al your other imagery in this delightful poem, Chris. Well penned. Chris Green November 22, 2019 at 7:52 AM Thank you so much Line. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Heidi Sands November 21, 2019 at 9:07 PM This poem is just amazing. I am at a loss for words. Although , it has been a long day...I can get lost in this, as I read it twice. It is peaceful, and a pleasurable journey to take. Your heart shines through. :) I hope you have a nice day, when you catch up with this :) Chris Green November 22, 2019 at 7:02 AM What a very nice thing to say. Thank you so much Heidi for your always humbling words. I always look forward to your visits.

Sandra Adams November 21, 2019 at 6:35 PM wow....your muse is/was surely on fire today, you never write anything less than beautiful and romantic my friend, you are truly a gifted poet, my only wish is that i could write half this good...exquisite penning, goodnight my friend! hugs, may your dreams be as sweet as your poetic words... Chris Green November 22, 2019 at 7:01 AM Thank you so very much Sandy. You are always so kind to me. Your visits are always a smile on my face. I appreciate you my friend

Midnight Aurora November 21, 2019 at 5:33 PM Wow...how do you come up with this stuff... and so quickly. I imagine that all of your thoughts are just in beautiful poetic form like this...Incredible! Chris Green November 22, 2019 at 7:00 AM Not so quickly, I worked on this one for a while. I am happy you liked it and appreciate your kind words.