Inviting Forever

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Even if moonlight is broken
and wild flowers bloom
beneath a stolen sun
lost in a dawning song,
sung in off key silhouettes
along a chorale reef
drenched in caramel pages
of forgotten ink...

amidst an ocean’s marathon,
waving to popsicle patrons,
melting your smile
in every sweetness now
clinging to shirt tails
of written directions
leading away…

we will find our place
deep within the twilight secrets
on the crest of a 
November whisper
among the hidden forests
and daffodil daydreams…

as evening swirls in
enchanting vistas
painted the color of your eyes,
where lingering stardust 
serenades melodically call
in the echoes of our hearts

inviting forever
to become
one with our love

~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/27/2019 7:55:00 AM
Back with congrats on your POTD, Chris. Superbly penned.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/27/2019 8:38:00 AM
Thank you my friend for all of the kindness you show me.
Date: 11/26/2019 3:32:00 PM
Somehow I missed out on this gem. Congrats on POTD, Chris! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 11/26/2019 3:44:00 PM
Whatever, you know you were just ignoring me. :) just kidding, thanks so much my friend.
Date: 11/24/2019 3:02:00 PM
So very lovely Chris and worthy of the honor of having a chosen as POTD! Congratulations my friend. : ) xxoo
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:26:00 AM
Thank you so very much Connie.
Date: 11/24/2019 9:39:00 AM
Late Congrats!! my friend on POTD!!...silky smooth wording Chris...you are a master at this...all the best...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 11/25/2019 9:26:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 11/24/2019 2:50:00 AM
Congrats on potd!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:25:00 AM
Thank you Brenda
Date: 11/23/2019 10:09:00 PM
Oh my!! I am breathless. This is so beautiful and romantic. Your thoughts whisper softly upon my heart, a melody that lingers for always. Tender moments to caress. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:25:00 AM
Thank you so very much Brandy. :)
Date: 11/23/2019 4:44:00 PM
Well done Chris no surprise though, Congratulations on POTD your words always speak magic
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:24:00 AM
Thanks so very much Bobby.
Date: 11/23/2019 2:05:00 PM
I'm not surprised that this is POTD. It truly is exceptional. Congrats on the honour, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:24:00 AM
Thank you so very much MA. I appreciate your nice comment
Date: 11/23/2019 12:53:00 PM
Fantastic write , Chris, I love the descriptive imagery .. Congratulations on POTD very well deserved …. Hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Eve for your kind thoughts
Date: 11/23/2019 12:45:00 PM
- I love this from top to bottom ... congratulations on well deserved p.o.t.d., Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
Date: 11/23/2019 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations for your well deserved POTD Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Heidi for your kindness.
Date: 11/23/2019 9:43:00 AM
congratulations Chris on your POTD.... your poetry always shines... most if not all of your poetry is deserving of the honor ... hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:22:00 AM
Thank you my friend for always being so nice to me.
Date: 11/23/2019 8:50:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Chris well deserved.
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Date: 11/25/2019 9:22:00 AM
Thanks so much Greg.
Date: 11/23/2019 7:12:00 AM
Chris, congratulations on POTD with your enchantingly beautiful romantic poem!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:21:00 AM
Thanks so very much Tania.
Date: 11/23/2019 6:51:00 AM
Chris, this is a masterpiece - congratulations on POTD - a talented write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:21:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Jennifer.
Date: 11/23/2019 6:45:00 AM
Simply the best from a master of romantic poetry! Kudos on POTD, Chris. Love and more love always.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:21:00 AM
Thanks a bunch Freddie.
Date: 11/23/2019 6:35:00 AM
WoW! Chris, This is so romantic and dreamy. The content and imagery is just breathtaking. I see why you got such an honor . Congratulations on the poem of day. It was well deserved. Have a great weekend my friend:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:20:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
Date: 11/23/2019 6:31:00 AM
Superb write, as always--congrats Chris on poem of the day--you are a gifted poet!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:19:00 AM
Thanks Vijay, I appreciate it.
Date: 11/23/2019 5:55:00 AM
Simply sublime, Chris:-) You're such a gifted poet. Heartiest congratulations on your POTD recognition!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:19:00 AM
Thank you so very much Edward.
Date: 11/23/2019 5:23:00 AM
Another poem to love by you... Congrats and blessings, Gina
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:18:00 AM
Thank you Gina for your kind words.
Date: 11/23/2019 5:06:00 AM
You certainly set the standard for composing free verse Chris. Congrats on POTD. Tom.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2019 9:18:00 AM
Thanks so very much Tom.
Date: 11/22/2019 7:45:00 AM
I like your deliberate use of the word chorale and al your other imagery in this delightful poem, Chris. Well penned.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/22/2019 7:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Line. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 11/21/2019 9:07:00 PM
This poem is just amazing. I am at a loss for words. Although , it has been a long day...I can get lost in this, as I read it twice. It is peaceful, and a pleasurable journey to take. Your heart shines through. :) I hope you have a nice day, when you catch up with this :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/22/2019 7:02:00 AM
What a very nice thing to say. Thank you so much Heidi for your always humbling words. I always look forward to your visits.
Date: 11/21/2019 6:35:00 PM
wow....your muse is/was surely on fire today, you never write anything less than beautiful and romantic my friend, you are truly a gifted poet, my only wish is that i could write half this good...exquisite penning, goodnight my friend! hugs, may your dreams be as sweet as your poetic words...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/22/2019 7:01:00 AM
Thank you so very much Sandy. You are always so kind to me. Your visits are always a smile on my face. I appreciate you my friend
Date: 11/21/2019 5:33:00 PM
Wow...how do you come up with this stuff... and so quickly. I imagine that all of your thoughts are just in beautiful poetic form like this...Incredible!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/22/2019 7:00:00 AM
Not so quickly, I worked on this one for a while. I am happy you liked it and appreciate your kind words.
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