Inviting Eyes

he said your eyes are looking so deep and inviting today, ,
i said my eyes have always been inviting,
you didn't have time to read them, , , , ! !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Inman Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 11:03 AM
This is lovely, I can't imagine someone not taking the time to look into your eyes.
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February 22, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Anita, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 29, 2016 at 3:53 PM
what one misses, another may catch....what one rips, another may patch....what one fears, another may champion....and what one discards may be another's companion....Beautifully sweet anita....;)
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