Invitation

A wink of my eye, Sly smiles of, "come on over;" Deviant manners.

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James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 12:26:00 PM

The inviting eye, nice one Abe>>James

Belinda Parish

Date: 2/10/2009 8:24:00 PM

Naughty boy...lol Good Senryu

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/10/2009 6:40:00 PM

Funny poem Abe, this one made me smile. Love E.

Darleen Bilyeu

Date: 2/5/2009 11:32:00 AM

really awsome keep up the good work!!!

Raven Carr

Date: 2/4/2009 11:26:00 AM

hey mr.L.that was awsome.i never thought of that.nice!!!!!!!!

Anna Mayall

Date: 2/4/2009 11:15:00 AM

great i love it

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/4/2009 5:32:00 AM

Great Senyru, Abe! This also gave me a chucklethis morning. Thank you for sharing this and your thoughtful comments. Good luck! Love, Robin

Date: 2/3/2009 1:01:00 PM

This one has me chuckling. It wouldn't have worked on me though. Enjoyed it though. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comments on my haiku. Have a nice day. Karen

Tyler Martin

Date: 2/3/2009 3:05:00 AM

thanks for your support and you have a hand at writing haiku's and senryu's. Keep up the good work. Tyler

Brian Strand

Date: 2/3/2009 12:08:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Abe.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/2/2009 5:45:00 PM

Deviant manner is a great line, Nice work...Raul