Invitation

A wink of my eye,
Sly smiles of, "come on over;"
Deviant manners.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 12:26 PM
The inviting eye, nice one Abe>>James
Parish Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 8:24 PM
Naughty boy...lol Good Senryu
Neal Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 6:40 PM
Funny poem Abe, this one made me smile. Love E.
Bilyeu Avatar
February 5, 2009 at 11:32 AM
really awsome keep up the good work!!!
Carr Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 11:26 AM
hey mr.L.that was awsome.i never thought of that.nice!!!!!!!!
Mayall Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 11:15 AM
great i love it
Gass Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 5:32 AM
Great Senyru, Abe! This also gave me a chucklethis morning. Thank you for sharing this and your thoughtful comments. Good luck! Love, Robin
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February 3, 2009 at 1:01 PM
This one has me chuckling. It wouldn't have worked on me though. Enjoyed it though. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comments on my haiku. Have a nice day. Karen
Martin Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 3:05 AM
thanks for your support and you have a hand at writing haiku's and senryu's. Keep up the good work. Tyler
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February 3, 2009 at 12:08 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Abe.Rgds Brian
Moreno Avatar
February 2, 2009 at 5:45 PM
Deviant manner is a great line, Nice work...Raul
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