Invisiblity Spell -An Excerpt Brigitte Pace

“Place this cloak around you and blink six times
You will then hear three chimes
When your body begins to shudder
You’ll be invisible to your own mother!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Buhagiar Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 2:52 AM
Fantasy poem or truth. I would like them both.
Pace Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 1:35 AM
Part of a fanstasy story. I will post more! Thank you.
Leffanta Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 10:58 AM
Unfortunately, so many children are invisible to their mother without the cloak, but enjoyed! Aloha!
Pace Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 11:19 AM
Hi Rico. This is part of a fantasy story I wrote some time ago. I'll post bits and bobs for fun.
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