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Invisible Wounds

Dull rumors pierce deeper than knives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/2/2010 12:55:00 AM
Yes they do. Nice write!
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Date: 1/1/2010 2:35:00 PM
How did I miss this insightful write? Wise words!!! Happy New Year, Raul! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/31/2009 4:30:00 PM
dull rumors, they are really very sharp and murderous. Sorry if you have been hurt. Let it roll off like water on a duck's back.
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Date: 12/31/2009 11:44:00 AM
Elegant words Raul.. with much truth to them .. luv your title as they are invisible wounds to the person carrying them around and the persons seeing but not seeing... wonderful Epigram.. u have been an excellent teacher for the Epigram style which I like very much these days... blessings.. luv... thankxxx for your nice comment on my poetry today... blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/30/2009 7:17:00 AM
Spectacular write! I have felt the pierce before ! Blessings and happiness in 2010 and everafter! Hugs Always, Robin
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Date: 12/26/2009 10:23:00 AM
A powerful and harsh truth great line this is a form i could never write in because i wouldnt even know how to start great write
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Date: 12/26/2009 5:42:00 AM
So true, your words in this Epigram Raul >> James
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Date: 12/22/2009 5:07:00 AM
Rumors suck...99 % untrue yet can be devastating... How true Raul ,,,,How true....Taz
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Date: 12/22/2009 1:02:00 AM
A MASTERPIECE! Lainie
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:34:00 PM
This is awesome! This is masterful, Raul! Very challenging indeed! Superb!
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Date: 12/19/2009 11:01:00 PM
Returning, just to say, this is THE winner for me. Awesome Epigram! And thanks for the challenge. God bless, Caroline.
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Date: 12/19/2009 10:59:00 PM
Yep Raul,this one is very good!Its all about Words.Words can make one feel happy or sad,good or bad... So lets all becareful what to say and be kind in our words.. Raul lately i'm busy so just in case i wont be online in these days,I wanna wish you a peaceful Xmas and a Happy New Year,tnks for being a friend--Charma
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Date: 12/19/2009 5:11:00 PM
thank you for placing my poem "the deposition" it is much appreciated !
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Date: 12/19/2009 5:10:00 PM
a very wrenching write ..... we must be careful of the words we toss into the wind to be carried to living souls!
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Date: 12/19/2009 5:07:00 PM
So much truth in your words. Rumors sure do a lot of damage--sometimes they cause lifetime hurts. Powerful way to convey your message. Thank you for your thoughts. Am feeling a bit better today. I appreciate your concern. Karen
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Date: 12/19/2009 12:39:00 PM
I like this very vivid, concrete 6-worder! Thanks for liking my Deposition poem, and placing it in your contest...I learned a lot about that piece just from your small blurb description...it was fun!
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Date: 12/19/2009 9:37:00 AM
Indeed they do, Raul. In the Christmas spirit I am sending best wishes for a joyous holiday season your way. Peace and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 12/19/2009 8:50:00 AM
They sure do!!! Much wisdom in your words Raul. A very thought provoking write. Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patricia
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Date: 12/19/2009 8:17:00 AM
Thank you Raul for the encouragement to my poetry in your contest.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/19/2009 8:11:00 AM
That is very true. It can. Great Epigram. Thanks for sharing and thank you for choosing me to be among the success in your contest on "The Deposition". Really appreciated, very encouraging. God bless and Merry Christmas and a very happy new Year 2010. Caroline.
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Date: 12/19/2009 6:56:00 AM
and oh the scars that never heal. Excellent thought provoking Epigram, Raul. -Robert
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Date: 12/19/2009 5:03:00 AM
Another way that we as humans kill. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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