Invisible To the Eye

One glance from her eyes 
so dark and brown putting me under
her spell, my world spun around
& her voice of pure velvet
enlightend my inner thoughts in which my
mind mind drifts through the magic of her laughter 
and while she uplifts my soul from the ground
and as the days count down
the day will finally set for my queen to be crowned.
She is my dream at night, 
all I can invision is her stealing the spotlight
and as she make other females jealous of
her perpetual beauty
all I can say to her is 
Baby what are you doing to me?
her swaying hips
luscious lips
her admirablle smile
somebody stop me because
one more look of her
delightful & exquisite analysis
may hold me up for trial.
I close my eyes and try to imagine
what our future will turn out as
see there is more to your beauty 
than sex appeals
Not alot  of brothas know that
you have class
yet again you uplift my soul from the ground
and as I lay my head upon my chest
the only tune I love listening to is your heart pound.
Her Personality is her Game & physical attractiveness
is pure fame
all the childish picc up lines from other brothas 
is what she calls lame
aside from them, i drop my head 
with the doubt of never having her 
yet she raises my head and seales me with a kiss
and say, WE ARE EQUALLY THE SAME
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Mel. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 10:50 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Mel
Brown Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 4:49 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mel. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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