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Invisible Poem

fittingly unseen how it feels intended meaning MagiCicada13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Quoth Theraven
Date: 7/27/2019 4:23:00 PM
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Maureen, Interestingly paradoxical. "Like a clock whose hands are sweeping past the minutes of its face, And the world is like an apple whirling silently in space, Like the circles that you find in the windmills of your mind," -Legrand
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/22/2019 8:35:00 AM
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Now that's clever!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/21/2019 5:41:00 PM
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I honestly expected to see nothing but the title, if that...although I can't say that I'm disappointed! Best always, gw (Soup mail, please)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/21/2019 10:17:00 AM
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Lovely...so much said in so few words.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/20/2019 10:55:00 PM
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Super wonderful Maureen. The unseen has a lot of symbolism. GREAT art Maureen!!!
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Sand Blown
Date: 7/20/2019 12:21:00 PM
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nice nice nice...reminds me of a moody blues song lyric...'i can see them but they can't see me'
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Franci Hoffman
Date: 7/20/2019 9:27:00 AM
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Love the title which is a great lead into the poem. Well done!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 7/20/2019 7:56:00 AM
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Inevitably it comes out...the true meaning cannot be hidden...Nice one...
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Silent One
Date: 7/20/2019 5:28:00 AM
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people should be more direct.... innit?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/20/2019 1:22:00 AM
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Your title adds a lot of insight to this poem, Maureen. Well done!
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