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Invisible Poem

fittingly unseen
                  
                                          how it feels

                                     intended meaning






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Copyright © Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart | Year Posted 2019

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Quoth Theraven Date: 7/27/2019 4:23:00 PM Maureen, Interestingly paradoxical. "Like a clock whose hands are sweeping past the minutes of its face, And the world is like an apple whirling silently in space, Like the circles that you find in the windmills of your mind," -Legrand Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 7/22/2019 8:35:00 AM Now that's clever! Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/21/2019 5:41:00 PM I honestly expected to see nothing but the title, if that...although I can't say that I'm disappointed! Best always, gw (Soup mail, please) Login to Reply

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 7/21/2019 10:17:00 AM Lovely...so much said in so few words. Login to Reply

Jeff Connelly Date: 7/20/2019 10:55:00 PM Super wonderful Maureen. The unseen has a lot of symbolism. GREAT art Maureen!!! Login to Reply

Sand Blown Date: 7/20/2019 12:21:00 PM nice nice nice...reminds me of a moody blues song lyric...'i can see them but they can't see me' Login to Reply

Franci Hoffman Date: 7/20/2019 9:27:00 AM Love the title which is a great lead into the poem. Well done! Login to Reply

Arturo Michael Date: 7/20/2019 7:56:00 AM Inevitably it comes out...the true meaning cannot be hidden...Nice one... Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 7/20/2019 5:28:00 AM people should be more direct.... innit? Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/20/2019 1:22:00 AM Your title adds a lot of insight to this poem, Maureen. Well done! Login to Reply