Invisible Poem

fittingly unseen
                  
                                          how it feels

                                     intended meaning






MagiCicada13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

Poem

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Theraven Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 4:23 PM
Maureen, Interestingly paradoxical. "Like a clock whose hands are sweeping past the minutes of its face, And the world is like an apple whirling silently in space, Like the circles that you find in the windmills of your mind," -Legrand
Kiser Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 8:35 AM
Now that's clever!
Wolf Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 5:41 PM
I honestly expected to see nothing but the title, if that...although I can't say that I'm disappointed! Best always, gw (Soup mail, please)
Mcgee Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 10:17 AM
Lovely...so much said in so few words.
Connelly Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 10:55 PM
Super wonderful Maureen. The unseen has a lot of symbolism. GREAT art Maureen!!!
Blown Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 12:21 PM
nice nice nice...reminds me of a moody blues song lyric...'i can see them but they can't see me'
Hoffman Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 9:27 AM
Love the title which is a great lead into the poem. Well done!
Michael Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 7:56 AM
Inevitably it comes out...the true meaning cannot be hidden...Nice one...
One Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 5:28 AM
people should be more direct.... innit?
Krutsinger Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 1:22 AM
Your title adds a lot of insight to this poem, Maureen. Well done!
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