Invisible Clothes

Habits Ingrained,die hard- We need a helping hand To disrobe,transform our inner Nature

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Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/28/2008 4:53:00 AM

Brian, this is so truth filled and supports faith and belief strongly and clearly. Yes, clothes are transparant, especially to He, whom which we stand before. Michael

P Sheart

Date: 7/27/2008 7:28:00 AM

Just beautiful Brian. From a spiritual bases hopefully we're always changing. Love Light Truth Patricia

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/27/2008 3:47:00 AM

I liked your use of this form Brian - the message is quite profound - It's never to late to change - powerful poem Brian - blessings

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/27/2008 2:38:00 AM

So difficult sometimes. We need to want to change first of all, then yes, perhaps a little help indeed. Awesome cinquain. Love, Shar