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'invisible'

the markings are all gone washed away invisible and yet they are still so evident etched into my mind every piece perfectly fitted until that day the water came down chaos confusion panic the water swept away everything familiar blank faces staring back at me am I invisible too they walked right through me my thoughts suspended my footsteps halted my breathing - am I even alive? ©Wilma Neels 210420121710

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William Darnell Sr.

Date: 7/22/2020 12:51:00 PM

Hi Wilma. Wow, such writing. Well penned, my friend. I had to reread it, and I think it will be in my favorites now. I really need to come on more often and start reading everyone's poetry. Such a pleasure reading this, thank you. Have a beautiful day. Best of Wishes, William

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/15/2015 9:37:00 AM

I enjoyed your winning poem!

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2015 11:44:00 PM

Wilma, congratulations on your win. **SKAT**

Lee Carter

Date: 7/14/2015 11:32:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem congrats on your win!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/14/2015 10:42:00 PM

I think everyone can relate to this poem. I know that I can. We've all had days when we felt invisible or out of place... A very emotive and deeply moving write, Wilma. Congrats on the win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2015 9:56:00 AM

WILMA , Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 5/20/2012 1:12:00 PM

the first poem i ever posted here was of the same title , very strong and honest jst like yours. I realy enjoyed this . Ronny

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/2/2012 2:01:00 PM

A very strong write on reality and understanding life events Wilma..Really enjoyed your words here:)

Debra Squyres

Date: 4/23/2012 11:24:00 AM

Out of body or spirit?? Very mysterious write. Enjoyed !!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2012 5:41:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry. It is always a pleasure to be able to read yours Wilma. Love, Carol

Katie Telling

Date: 4/22/2012 8:14:00 PM

This is great wilma, it immediately caught my attention from the first stanza... I look forward to reading more of your poetry :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/22/2012 3:05:00 PM

This is am amazing piece. Every thought I have on it is commented below lol. That's a good thing. Very happy to be reading my CTH today. Luv just Michael