Invisible

Wipe away the make up,
The stain no one sees.
Don't fuss with pretty clothing,
Pains no one needs.

For you are invisible,
A girl for no eye,
Room full of people, but,
No need for disguise.

A heart full of feeling,
Love no one shares.
Stand just by doorways,
Know no one cares.

For you are invisible,
No face to recall.
A shadow in the corner,
Some one very small.

The man will not see you,
Watch him pass by.
The man will not love you,
Will not see you cry.

For you are invisible,
A girl no one knows,
Excluded always, but,
The pain never shows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/23/2010 6:14:00 AM
Great write about feeling unloved and unnoticed...You are loved and someone notices you...You are a awesome spirit being of magnificent worth as a person truly loved of God...Keep the creative pen flowing..I wrote one this morning about Spiraling Universe that you should read..Sara
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Date: 5/2/2010 6:03:00 AM
Sometimes one has to makes ones self seen. Sometimes not easy as we are built differently. Wonderful poem Sarah >> James
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Date: 3/5/2010 10:20:00 AM
I am enjoying reading everyone's poetry today. I am glad to see your poetry posted here amongest the others I am reading today Sarah. Wishing you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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