Invisible

She passes him in the hall
A friendly smile but that is all
She want's to get to know him
But never will

Invisible

He likes her but she doesn't know
How much longer can this go?
He's not sure how much longer he
can last he tries to hold on and wants
a love that lasts

Invisible

She wakes up in the night and cries
with a mix of hurt and joy
for she sees him in her dreams
But reality hits and she knows
that it was just a dream

Invisible

He wants to know the truth in life and
then finds her. They finally meet for the first time
a true true love that's so divine

They are no longer...

Invisible
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mitchell Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 9:49 AM
I like how you show both sides, and how you used repetition of 'Invisible'
Loveless Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 11:06 AM
this is...amazing...now if only my story would have ended like that. intead he has a gf, cheats on her...okay im guilty for that one...and now we barely talk. and he treats me half the time like hes invisible..but anyways. this is really good i like it =) xo rainbow
Brown Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 4:37 AM
Wonderful poetry you present to us today Brittany. I hope your week finds you with an overflow of inspiration which you may use to inspire others. Love and blessings to you, Carol
Nutter Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 12:46 PM
Enjoyable imaginative write.
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