Invisably Enlightened Over All

This is really good fun
no one can see me at all
but I can see everyone else
this is astounding, feel so tall

It's amazing what you see
when nobody has eyes upon you
so free to watch on and on
especially to know what to do

Looking now seeing weddings aplenty
love proposes for women love man
as man seeks women for his bride
bringing kids to extend life according to plan

Divorce is banned, no separation
harmony rules forever and a day
such sweetness and light to be found
hold it close before going grey

Invisably enlightened overall
nothing hidden for my eye to see
amazing dreams to wish upon
feels strong like that large tree

(I have written this poem from a quote "If You Became Suddenly Invisible What Would You Do And Go". You would realize  no one  could  see you anymore but you  could see them.)
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Proxenos Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Beautiful write as always my friend, i wish you all the luck but don't think its needed but best wished from across the pond. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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December 20, 2021 at 1:00 AM
Thanks Jenny, Glad you think it is beautiful, Hope you're doing ok, blessings and hugs, Gordon
Baker Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 1:31 PM
Good luck in the contest Gordon. I liked it, rhymed well and entertaining. Bill
Mcconnell Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 2:22 PM
Thanks Bill, Glad you enjoyed this one and found it entertaining. Have a great weekend, Gordon
Cunningham Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 12:32 PM
That would be one amazing experience Gordon. Enjoyed your verse, have a great weekend. Tom
Mcconnell Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Thanks Tom, Glad you enjoyed it and trust you'll have a great weekend too blessings always,Gordon
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