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Invisably Enlightened Over All

This is really good fun no one can see me at all but I can see everyone else this is astounding, feel so tall It's amazing what you see when nobody has eyes upon you so free to watch on and on especially to know what to do Looking now seeing weddings aplenty love proposes for women love man as man seeks women for his bride bringing kids to extend life according to plan Divorce is banned, no separation harmony rules forever and a day such sweetness and light to be found hold it close before going grey Invisably enlightened overall nothing hidden for my eye to see amazing dreams to wish upon feels strong like that large tree (I have written this poem from a quote "If You Became Suddenly Invisible What Would You Do And Go". You would realize no one could see you anymore but you could see them.)

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Date: 12/19/2021 8:29:00 AM
Beautiful write as always my friend, i wish you all the luck but don't think its needed but best wished from across the pond. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/20/2021 1:00:00 AM
Thanks Jenny, Glad you think it is beautiful, Hope you're doing ok, blessings and hugs, Gordon
Date: 12/3/2021 1:31:00 PM
Good luck in the contest Gordon. I liked it, rhymed well and entertaining. Bill
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/3/2021 2:22:00 PM
Thanks Bill, Glad you enjoyed this one and found it entertaining. Have a great weekend, Gordon
Date: 12/3/2021 12:32:00 PM
That would be one amazing experience Gordon. Enjoyed your verse, have a great weekend. Tom
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/3/2021 2:21:00 PM
Thanks Tom, Glad you enjoyed it and trust you'll have a great weekend too blessings always,Gordon

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