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In an ocean of water drops, be a magnificent pearl.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/30/2020 7:56:00 AM
Wow.. A fave for me.. Fantastic Monoku.. Incredible thought..
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Date: 11/19/2019 3:59:00 AM
Trying my best. Still a lot of water, but a drop of change. Thank you, Kai
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Date: 11/1/2019 9:15:00 AM
This is what we strive for.
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Date: 10/28/2019 9:51:00 AM
Oh yes. xomo
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Date: 10/23/2019 5:11:00 PM
Indeed...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/7/2019 7:45:00 PM
“How could you reach the pearl by only looking at the sea? If you seek the pearl, be a diver.” – Rumi
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:07:00 AM
:)
Date: 10/20/2019 12:46:00 PM
I highlighted this write and kept it as a book mark. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:08:00 AM
Oh that's so nice of you!!
Date: 10/18/2019 9:49:00 AM
I like how amazing this poem is with such few words.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:08:00 AM
Thanks a lot Richard :)
Date: 10/17/2019 6:22:00 PM
Wow you said a mouthful with just a few words!;)
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:08:00 AM
Thanks Brenda :)
Date: 10/17/2019 3:51:00 PM
Ha, ha! Speaking of 'pearls,' see my comment on your poem, 'Death.' … A standout monoku, my friend! :) gw
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:09:00 AM
Vohooo!! I did notice that:) thanks Gershon :)
Date: 10/17/2019 1:42:00 PM
Hello Swetha Vangaveti, I like this monoku. Have a nice day my friend.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:09:00 AM
Glad you liked it. Thanks a lot Darlene :)