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Invincible You

In an ocean of water drops, be a magnificent pearl.

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Joseph May

February 24, 2022 at 2:35 PM

I enjoyed this write, we should endeavour to be the best

Evelyn Judy Buehler

February 15, 2022 at 11:33 AM

This is gorgeous, Swetha. It's a fave for me.

Anil Deo

February 11, 2022 at 10:09 AM

Very creative write, Swetha. I join your positive commentators ( thanX for visiting my page. We kinda met via a joke, SLAPPED) OM SHALOM SHALOM

Jenish Somadas

January 30, 2020 at 7:56 AM

Wow.. A fave for me.. Fantastic Monoku.. Incredible thought..

Kai Michael Neumann

November 19, 2019 at 3:59 AM

Trying my best. Still a lot of water, but a drop of change. Thank you, Kai

Caren Krutsinger

November 1, 2019 at 9:15 AM

This is what we strive for.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 28, 2019 at 9:51 AM

Oh yes. xomo

Pashang Salehi

October 23, 2019 at 5:11 PM

Indeed...

Pashang Salehi

November 7, 2019 at 7:45 PM

“How could you reach the pearl by only looking at the sea? If you seek the pearl, be a diver.” – Rumi

Swetha Vangaveti

October 27, 2019 at 6:07 AM

Jennifer Proxenos

October 20, 2019 at 12:46 PM

I highlighted this write and kept it as a book mark. Hugs, Jennifer.

Swetha Vangaveti

October 27, 2019 at 6:08 AM

Oh that's so nice of you!!

Richard Lamoureux

October 18, 2019 at 9:49 AM

I like how amazing this poem is with such few words.

Swetha Vangaveti

October 27, 2019 at 6:08 AM

Thanks a lot Richard :)

Brenda Chiri

October 17, 2019 at 6:22 PM

Wow you said a mouthful with just a few words!;)

Swetha Vangaveti

October 27, 2019 at 6:08 AM

Thanks Brenda :)

Gershon Wolf

October 17, 2019 at 3:51 PM

Ha, ha! Speaking of 'pearls,' see my comment on your poem, 'Death.' … A standout monoku, my friend! :) gw

Swetha Vangaveti

October 27, 2019 at 6:09 AM

Vohooo!! I did notice that:) thanks Gershon :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 17, 2019 at 1:42 PM

Hello Swetha Vangaveti, I like this monoku. Have a nice day my friend.

Swetha Vangaveti

October 27, 2019 at 6:09 AM

Glad you liked it. Thanks a lot Darlene :)

Invincible You

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