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Home » Poems » Swetha Vangaveti » Invincible You

Invincible You

In an ocean of water drops, be a magnificent pearl.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Joseph May
Date: 2/24/2022 2:35:00 PM
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I enjoyed this write, we should endeavour to be the best
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/15/2022 11:33:00 AM
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This is gorgeous, Swetha. It's a fave for me.
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Anil Deo
Date: 2/11/2022 10:09:00 AM
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Very creative write, Swetha. I join your positive commentators ( thanX for visiting my page. We kinda met via a joke, SLAPPED) OM SHALOM SHALOM
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/30/2020 7:56:00 AM
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Wow.. A fave for me.. Fantastic Monoku.. Incredible thought..
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/19/2019 3:59:00 AM
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Trying my best. Still a lot of water, but a drop of change. Thank you, Kai
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/1/2019 9:15:00 AM
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This is what we strive for.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/28/2019 9:51:00 AM
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Oh yes. xomo
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/23/2019 5:11:00 PM
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Indeed...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/7/2019 7:45:00 PM
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“How could you reach the pearl by only looking at the sea? If you seek the pearl, be a diver.” – Rumi
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:07:00 AM
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:)
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/20/2019 12:46:00 PM
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I highlighted this write and kept it as a book mark. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:08:00 AM
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Oh that's so nice of you!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2019 9:49:00 AM
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I like how amazing this poem is with such few words.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:08:00 AM
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Thanks a lot Richard :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/17/2019 6:22:00 PM
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Wow you said a mouthful with just a few words!;)
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:08:00 AM
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Thanks Brenda :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/17/2019 3:51:00 PM
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Ha, ha! Speaking of 'pearls,' see my comment on your poem, 'Death.' … A standout monoku, my friend! :) gw
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:09:00 AM
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Vohooo!! I did notice that:) thanks Gershon :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/17/2019 1:42:00 PM
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Hello Swetha Vangaveti, I like this monoku. Have a nice day my friend.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:09:00 AM
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Glad you liked it. Thanks a lot Darlene :)

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