Bl Devnath Poet Quatrain

Invincible Sentinel

thick condensed white cumulus attacking 
                          lighthouse's captured inflicting painful terror 
                          Angel cold wind rescues by melting enemies
                            frees from cloudy despair leaving no error

                           invincible warrior Angel never fears to fight
                         controls the sky keeping with its fittest might
                        from every angles distance to distance falls sight 
                         releases from all kinds of heart pain from  plight

                          whole day and night it travels with cool mind
                           watches in silence the happenings surround 
                           in need with anger it bursts out at that time
                            destroys the opposite power making sound 


Sentinel Quatrain Form - Poetry Contest by Eve Roper
9th April,16

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Poet Destroyer A April 26, 2016 at 12:46 AM I mostly love the last line friend... Congratulations on the win... Bl... Linda Bl Devnath April 26, 2016 at 4:29 AM Thanks my lovely *friend for your comment. Loved always, bl

Rizwana Bhurani April 15, 2016 at 7:25 PM Inspiring piece with wonderful vocab.....congrats Bl Devnath April 16, 2016 at 1:29 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your wonderful comment. Loved always, bl

Paul Callus April 10, 2016 at 2:33 PM Standing steadfast against opposing forces. Good imagery, BL. gl in the contest. Regards // paul Bl Devnath April 10, 2016 at 2:40 PM Thanks a lot from my heart for your beautiful comment with credit and for your heartfelt good wishes my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Afolabi Muideen April 10, 2016 at 11:32 AM I enjoyed reading this gem friend. Thanks for sharing.....love........A.M. Bl Devnath April 10, 2016 at 11:35 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your appreciation with comment. Loved always, bl

Daniel Turner April 9, 2016 at 5:44 PM Great interpretation BL. Good luck my friend:) Bl Devnath April 10, 2016 at 9:38 AM Thanks my lovely friend for stopping by on my poem. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison April 9, 2016 at 4:56 PM very powerful imagery BL good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Bl Devnath April 9, 2016 at 4:59 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your inspiring comment with wishing good luck. Loved always, bl