Invincible Dreams - Collaboration With White Wolf

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As I incorporate colours with images in my dreams,
Still it’s more the emotional attachments that set the scenes.
Like an onlooker in another world of landscapes,
I am in control as I pull back the invisible drapes.

My mind wanders from my body so light
And flies off with birds into hot summer nights
I choose the scenes I want to participate in
I choose who will tonight be my fiend or kin

Why just last night I was challenged in combat,
Defending in Kung Fu but I never attack,
Until of course they make the first move,
But in dreams it is easy never to lose.

I'm a whirling dervish, dancing on my toes
Not fighting, but awing my friends and foes
While moving my mind wanders far away
I dance out of me, leave only my body to stay

     You will often find yourself in strange situations,
     Sometimes a dream will turn in various stipulations.

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January 31, 2017
White Wolf
Darren White

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/31/2017 6:10:00 PM
I simply love all your colaborations - you create amazing poems together - loved it <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/31/2017 11:20:00 PM
Thank you <3 :)
Date: 1/31/2017 10:20:00 AM
Well done Darren!! I commented on Wolf's post!! To dance like "a whirling dervish" !! What joy to behold!! Dream On!! ;)Big Hugggs, deb
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Darren White
Date: 1/31/2017 10:22:00 AM
Whirling dervishes are awesome :) Thanks Deb!
Date: 1/31/2017 7:26:00 AM
I commented on Rick's page on this wonderful collaboration. Great theme with a great message Darren. Dreams can be good and dreams can be bad, but in the end...they are just dreams.
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Darren White
Date: 1/31/2017 7:50:00 AM
Yeah. I like that theme a lot. And we find each other there perfectly. Thanks Chris :)
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