Invert Vision

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Invert vision, enter stillness Rest narrow ego view All souls one; recognise oneness Time’s now to fissures sew Love alone is real Exuding bliss appeal God’s magic that does heal End division Invert vision 09-December-2021 Quietus

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/9/2021 6:16:00 PM

Dear Seeker, your beautifully expressed poem is deep and meaningful and something to aspire to.. realizing love for one and all would lead humanity to Eden… “God’s magic that does heal”, indeed we need to let healing begin. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/9/2021 7:24:00 PM

Thank you dear Susan! Wish you greetings of the season and a joyous New Year ahead

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/9/2021 4:03:00 PM

That last couplet is a wonderful 'vision' of the future -- and the sooner the better that indivisibility is reached! ~ 20/10

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/9/2021 6:15:00 PM

Thanks Gershon! It’s easy actually to feel and know oneness if we shift from looking at outer appearance to recognition of the one spirit pervading all forms