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Introspection

Keep telling myself that I’m the best Give me a moment I need some rest Give me a moment to clear my brain For there is no pain, when there is gain I know it will get better soon Just an ordinary afternoon The world won't be offset A day I won't soon forget This will certainly be the worst The nice guy will surely finish first

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/30/2018 10:12:00 AM
You could try to write the poem in third person, then it would not be so much prose... For example 'he kept telling himself he was the best.' Any help or suggestions just ask Evan.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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Date: 1/30/2018 12:05:00 AM
This is a work in progress. I just wanted to get ideas down on a page. I realize there are too many "be" verbs. If you came from my Instagram page, feel free to dm me any comments, questions, or criticisms.
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