Introduction

"First she burst my bubble, 
then she said goodbye."
So the dream mother 
introduces my daughter to me.

Nameless, she plays in the sandbox,
digging up dirt even as a toddler.
Here is where I know her first:
Before her hospital cry;
before the bloody show.

I ask the dream mother what it was like
giving birth to the tot I do not yet know.

Her response leaves me in a cold sweat –

Now, too late to change direction:
her birth inevitable, as the goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pettit Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 5:48 PM
So this is where it all started? This was impressive.
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March 11, 2009 at 2:41 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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March 11, 2009 at 9:52 AM
Congrats Irene on "Introduction" being featured this week on Poetry soup. Vince
Mason Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 4:34 PM
This is either a very sad tribute to the loss of a child and/or a comment on pregancy or, then again, maybe all just imaginary ... smile ... it touches me even though I'm not sure and is a well-deserved selection to be a feature here at the Soup this week. Congratulations, Irene
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March 9, 2009 at 11:12 AM
Irene - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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March 9, 2009 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 7:49 PM
Irene Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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March 8, 2009 at 6:20 PM
Much to think about in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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