Intoxicating Wordless Sound

Seeking the solace in its voice
As it sings and serenades.
Intoxicating wordless sound
Carried along on air currents,
Transforms wind to song.

Mellow notes with breathless voice
Plays like a lovers embrace.
Deep earthy sounds perceived by ear.
Romancing my heart through song,
An alluring sound from the flute.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/17/2013 9:33:00 AM
wow, you did GREAT with this challenge. I did music as well. I think music is the most romantic of sounds!!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/17/2013 3:34:00 PM
When I clean house I put on music, and it doesn't feel like work. My duster dances in my hand. Thank for your lovely comment. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/15/2013 2:04:00 PM
The wordless sound with mellow notes is like a flute, such a beautiful tune that really feels as if your floating on air! You have described a perfect interlude of delight my friend! I truly loved reading this lovely poem this afternoon, what a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/15/2013 7:10:00 PM
I just love to hear the sound of a flute. It does make me spiritually float in air. Thanks for your lovely comment. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/15/2013 8:48:00 AM
A marvelous write my dear friend Connie! I love the sound of silence here. You're also highly creative and great poet. I'll fave this one. Thank you so much for sharing and your inspiring comments on my poem. Have a great day! love lots, Leonora
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/15/2013 7:14:00 PM
Thank you Leonora for your lovely comment. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem. I love the sound of a flute. Have a great evening. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/15/2013 7:43:00 AM
A romantic version of silence. Such power to this. Wonderfully done!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/15/2013 7:18:00 PM
Thank you Drake for your wonderful comment. The native flute is a powerful musical. Instrument. A mystical, romantic sound. Have a great evening. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/15/2013 7:00:00 AM
Very nice poem.
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/15/2013 7:18:00 PM
Thank you Mathew for stopping by. Much appreciated. Warm Smils, Connie
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