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Intoxicating Eclipse

Let me know all your smells I want to taste of them well. Let me hold all your funk and sweat with you. An eclipse blending fire melting ice filling limbs heavy with weight untold. Hot flames flicker flesh most ready heaving writhing they meet in a dark void. And then, as ashes smolder they rest in awe in sweat in the intoxication of an eclipse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 2/5/2009 6:08:00 PM
Hi Sue - Wow - I reckon the receiver of this poem was happy - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/4/2009 6:42:00 AM
Sue Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 2/3/2009 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2009 5:47:00 AM
That's one way to describe it, and a very good way too. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 2/2/2009 9:02:00 PM
Congratulations on this lovely write being featured this week, full of wondrous imagery...God Bless you and best wishes to you in your writing..Awesome!!*Tyesha
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Date: 2/2/2009 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations Sue, On your sexually explicit (now where's the damn illustrated guide) poem being featured. I guess now when I see an eclipse, I'll think of the song "There's a moon out Tonight." At my age I start breathing heavy just having my morning coffee. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 2/2/2009 12:54:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Sue . Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/1/2009 3:53:00 PM
The vivid imagery carries your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured! Keep on writing. I wish you ongoing success. Karen
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Date: 2/1/2009 11:25:00 AM
What?? How on earth did I miss this??? Whoa, this is incredible awesome! Congratulations Sue on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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