Intoxicated Love

You offer me the glass And at first I decide to pass But your charm and sincerity Began to get the best of me And your wine went straight to my head At first your love tasted sweet But I couldn’t swallow your lies and deceit I mistook love for intoxication And was too drunk to see your true intentions Yet I remember every word you said You said you would give me paradise But the cost was too great of a price You convinced me forever you sought So reluctantly your game I bought Now my hopes and dreams are dead The glass in my hand had shattered And I lost everything that ever mattered The cuts on my hand were long and deep As I look for blood from my skin to seep My heart was the only thing that bled
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May 6, 2016 at 10:43 AM
TONI, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. **skat**
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April 26, 2016 at 6:08 PM
toni, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
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December 22, 2011 at 7:17 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Toni. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. Love and blessing always, Carol
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December 22, 2011 at 2:43 AM
this is my fav
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