Intoxicated

when you smoke It's no joke smoking turns lungs black and causes you to hack
If you go ahead and smoke you are going to croak If you smoke pot your brain will rot
When you drink beer you can't think clear when you drink booze your brain will snooze
If you take a drug you will turn into a slug when you get high you might try to fly and 
you will die. If you go to a party be like a smarty make the right choice if you never 
drink and drive you will have a good chance of staying alive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Atkinson Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Such a constructive poem. You have my respect Lemonia.
Sims Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 10:33 PM
Thanks
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