Intoxicated

Your witty charm had me 
hook line and sinker.
I was under your spell; I 
can't get enough of you.
I love your mesmerizing 
eyes.
Your captivating smile,
Your smile is so radiant
Your body is like a sculpture 
of a Greek God.
I think you're related to 
Adonis. 
I enjoy having my fill of you.
Everything about you is so 
intoxicating.




09/09/2021
Contest: “ I” Old Or New
Sponsor: Constance La France
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Proxenos Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 9:24 AM
Well glad you lean towards Greek Gods, they have got the reputation of being picture perfect, but oh my why do they go around nude so often in both sculptures and pictures of yester year, not that that anyone is complaining of course! Well penned dear friend, good luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 6:28 AM
Stagger-ingly good, Alexis. Love and peace forever.
Faulkner Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 1:55 PM
That is certainly how we feel when we're caught in the spell of new love, very astute!
Allison Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 4:30 PM
are you drunk on love! :-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 8:35 AM
I haven't looked at the contest but I like this one. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for your visit to my page. We are feeling better but still are not where we were before. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Can love make you drunk?
Pandit Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 11:58 AM
Wonderfully intoxicated on love. All the best, Alexis.
Leffanta Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 11:37 AM
May you never get sober! Aloha! Rico
Poet Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 11:20 AM
Alexis, you've done it again. What a beautiful romantic poem. Love is in the air, and it brings your soul to jump for excitement. Good luck in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 8:47 AM
Oooh…Adonis!
Cunningham Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Romance is in the air Alexis, it makes your heart leap for joy. Good luck Tom
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