Intoxicated

Intoxicated
They intoxicate my world
And expect me to be royal
This is the picture of life 
Were my soul bleeds 
Still the world don't care 
Even doe I worry about 
The future of man with it nature 
Still I bleed to see 
That all given for the sake
Of love 
Is destroyed to vanity 
No wonder they intoxicate
My world 
Yet expect me to be royal

Intoxicated
I can't write normal 
Cos a normal soul don't bleed
Either could it see it realities
In the midst of his deformities
He thinks he is saved 
By same hands  whom
Never want his existence
So I challenge you 
Don't be blind 
We are need a life 
So start the change 
From you 
Cos sooner or later 
The world will change if not
 intoxicated
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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January 17, 2021 at 8:57 AM
indeed, clever write.
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January 17, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Wonderfully written.
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January 17, 2021 at 8:56 AM
This is really nice. I did notice that "spasmstic" seems to be a typo.
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January 17, 2021 at 8:55 AM
Wonderfully written.
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January 17, 2021 at 8:54 AM
Wonderfully written.
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January 17, 2021 at 8:54 AM
Wonderfully written.
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January 17, 2021 at 8:53 AM
This one was really well done. Good poem.
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January 17, 2021 at 8:52 AM
Wonderfully written.
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January 17, 2021 at 8:52 AM
Wonderfully written.
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January 17, 2021 at 8:51 AM
Wonderfully written.
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January 17, 2021 at 8:51 AM
Wonderfully written.
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