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Intoxicated

Intoxicated They intoxicate my world And expect me to be royal This is the picture of life Were my soul bleeds Still the world don't care Even doe I worry about The future of man with it nature Still I bleed to see That all given for the sake Of love Is destroyed to vanity No wonder they intoxicate My world Yet expect me to be royal Intoxicated I can't write normal Cos a normal soul don't bleed Either could it see it realities In the midst of his deformities He thinks he is saved By same hands whom Never want his existence So I challenge you Don't be blind We are need a life So start the change From you Cos sooner or later The world will change if not intoxicated

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Date: 1/17/2021 8:57:00 AM
indeed, clever write.
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Date: 1/17/2021 8:57:00 AM
Wonderfully written.
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Date: 1/17/2021 8:56:00 AM
This is really nice. I did notice that "spasmstic" seems to be a typo.
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Date: 1/17/2021 8:55:00 AM
Wonderfully written.
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Date: 1/17/2021 8:54:00 AM
Wonderfully written.
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Date: 1/17/2021 8:54:00 AM
Wonderfully written.
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Date: 1/17/2021 8:53:00 AM
This one was really well done. Good poem.
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Date: 1/17/2021 8:52:00 AM
Wonderfully written.
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Date: 1/17/2021 8:52:00 AM
Wonderfully written.
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Date: 1/17/2021 8:51:00 AM
Wonderfully written.
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Date: 1/17/2021 8:51:00 AM
Wonderfully written.
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