Intolerance

From the womb I sprung forth in a storm unrelenting
waves crashing ashore, endless bending and blending
alone and defenseless to weather the tempest
the gales blew relentless, clouding my senses

  Set adrift in that sea of the knowledge of man
attempting to stand, felt around with bare hands  
plunged deep in the waters, searching for others
consciousness faltered, eyes closing shutters

  Then I had awakened to find I'd been taken
to an archaic dwelling, time should have forsaken
a shaman commands- a glorious rant
a clasping of palms, an aggregate chant

  From what source? I did wonder, descending to ponder
was ultimate wisdom derived and contrived
upon examination, and deep contemplation
I viewed this creation, with grim consternation

  An anomaly present in each generation
a wise person born, elevated, and stationed
to higher position, with God given vision
Innate intuition brings truth to fruition

 Mankind in collective, this most stubborn creature
materialism his central shared feature
twisting to suit them to there situations
killing the prophets- forging the nations

  Undertows from life's currents did violently grab me
envelop and drag me, develop, distract me
manifesting unsettling neural connections
truth became slippery- changing directions

  Somewhere through the ages our paths had diverged
 wise words been perverted, and hatred emerged
 devouring souls, then swallowing whole
 foundations of kingdoms, rendering null

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/18/2015 5:14:00 AM
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Ronald Wheeler
Date: 4/27/2015 3:42:00 AM
Thanks Shadow!
Date: 4/13/2015 1:13:00 PM
Top marks for this your first contribution to Soup, Ronald. I am very much impressed by the depth of thought and expression. // Thank you for stopping by to read my poetry. All the best. // paul
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Ronald Wheeler
Date: 4/13/2015 2:51:00 PM
Thanks again Paul. And no problem, it was my pleasure!
Date: 4/8/2015 6:45:00 AM
Ronald, I hope you create more like this. I simply love the meter and rhyme wrapped around a powerful message like this. I give this a 7
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Ronald Wheeler
Date: 4/10/2015 4:46:00 AM
Thanks again kind sir!
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Ronald Wheeler
Date: 4/10/2015 1:25:00 AM
8 being the likes of The Erl King, and 9 The Raven right? Because you and I are both fully aware that 10 represents perfection. 10 is that little airbrushed plastic bimbo siren on basic cable between 5-6 am, trying desperately to lure lonely men's credit cards into the rocky shallows, only to be devoured by thrice divorced, post menopausal harpies. Who've more than well mastered the art of "faking" many long ages ago..... LMAO!!! Just being a douchebag man. Thanks Jerry, I truly appreciate it man. I've read some of your work as well, and was impressed! Thanks again my friend.
Date: 2/28/2015 8:46:00 PM
Ronald, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/10/2015 1:28:00 AM
Thank you kindly Linda!
Date: 2/27/2015 10:07:00 PM
Ronald, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Ronald Wheeler
Date: 3/28/2015 8:19:00 PM
Thank you SKAT. I'm 37 years old and live in Salisbury, NC. I just paint and write a little. I've started a novel, but I've decided to toy with a bit of verse when I'm suffering any block on that endeavor. I posted a few poems on here 7-8 years ago, and I can't seem to find them?! Oh well, guess I'll just have to write more? Can't wait to check out your work! Thanks for your time and kindness.
Date: 2/23/2015 12:50:00 PM
- A very well written poem, Ronald ! - I welcome you to the P Soup ! - Nice to meet you, looking forward to getting to know you and your poems - // Anne-Lise ;)
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Ronald Wheeler
Date: 3/28/2015 8:20:00 PM
Thanks and same to you!
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