Intolerance

United stand together hand in hand,

           Intolerance real boon,

          We move heaven and earth !





Written on 19/5/14
Kimo on pic #3- 10/7/6
Contest- three lines are fine
Sponsor- Debbie Guzzi


Now entered for contest "One Kimo-10/7/6" by Rick Parise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 5:13 PM
it is amazing what can be accomplished through teamwork, this piece shows the worth of working together. Grats on placing ;)
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 7:28 PM
Congrats on your win, Upma!
Scars Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:18 PM
Wow Dr. Upma, this is amazing. I love it because its so true and meaningful...well done lady... Congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
Callus Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:17 PM
I recall reading this lovely and meaningful Kimo once before, Upma. It has served you well...another merited win! Congratulations:) Regards // paul
Nayak Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 1:59 PM
Hearty congrats on your great win dear Dr.Upma, nicely penned kimo on strength of unity, enjoyed it!//love, Anu:)
A   Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 8:09 PM
nice win...PD
A  Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 8:03 AM
DR UMPA,, :) Enjoyed the 3 lines. Congrats on the win. Love ~SKAT~
Hamilton Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 7:05 AM
super pen Dr Upma congrats on win hugs
Bantawa Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 6:35 AM
congrats on your win!
Poteet Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Well-stated, a positive look a intolerance from the inside-out. It is a uniting factor in many causes. Congratulations, Dr. Upma.
A. Sharma Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 10:28 PM
Thanks Reason for the lovely wishes !
Sietesantos Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 2:34 PM
Well done, Dr. Upma - great write!
A. Sharma Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 10:29 PM
Thanks Pandita !
May Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 9:26 AM
Congrats on a fine win Dr Upma
A. Sharma Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 10:30 PM
Thanks Joseph !
Callus Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 8:47 AM
Very well said, Upma. Where there is division we tend to lose; unity counts a lot. Congrats on your fine win! // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 10:32 PM
Thanks for lovely much awaited wishes Paul ! glad u liked ,, and pleasant to be addressed the way u did !
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 1:56 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Debbie's contest, Dr. Upma
A. Sharma Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Thanks Dr Ram !
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 11:38 PM
awesome message. Congrats for your win.
A. Sharma Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 10:34 PM
Thanks for the visit n the wishes Andrea !
Johnson Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 9:06 PM
Congratulations. Love, Joyce
A. Sharma Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 10:35 PM
Thnaks Joyce ,, always feel pleasant to hv ur visits !
Sangwai Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 12:36 PM
Beautiful! Wish you best for the contest.
A. Sharma Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 10:28 PM
Thnaks for visit n the like Neelam !
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