Into You

Cohabitating with your floral penance, I slow grind With Memories All metaphorical bets, Off Jumping head first Another solemn wish Unto you To caress my smile Another didactic breath For your silky, titanium retinas To share this potent sway Against time I, grip Rusty handle bars to ride Upon your caramel sunsets Sweetened with diabetic urges, Feening Feening Inject me towards unbridled upbringings, Chrysanthemum sentences Etched upon your neck Of Egyptian cotton awakenings … I do not want to be your tomorrow, Because that could never be promised Yet, all we have is today. Because all we have is today. All we have is today… ©Drake J. Eszes

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/28/2015 10:51:00 AM

Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!

Courtney Courtney

Date: 1/15/2015 9:16:00 PM

good poem so daily cosmatic

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 12/16/2014 7:07:00 AM

So many great images here, some simply surreal but so appealing. A bit like reading a paisley print. What a journey.

Poet Tacito
Date: 1/7/2015 1:07:00 PM

I can really dig that description, Scott. :) Thank you so much!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/8/2014 4:09:00 AM

Where is your muse?Missing you r poetry

Poet Tacito
Date: 1/7/2015 1:07:00 PM

It'll always linger. That said, hi. :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/28/2014 11:10:00 PM

Hey you...I see you're online. What's up? Is there a new poem coming? I sure hope so. Been trying to listen to the shows. Success! Hey...Lots of hugs. Visit me.

Poet Tacito
Date: 1/7/2015 1:07:00 PM

Huge, huge hug. :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/26/2014 5:36:00 PM

Just wanted to stop by on this last poem you posted (which is, of course, uniquely one of a kind....your own signature!!)....but also to say that you are missed by those who loved to tune in and listen to you and your guests! Hope all is well, and that you plan to return to the soup as well as your show. Hope you are doing something great that has kept you too busy!! Best wishes, Drake!

Poet Tacito
Date: 10/26/2014 11:12:00 PM

Darling Carrie! I miss you all too. Life, has been entertaining & keep my eyes on it...away from PS. But, I still make time when I can to be here. :) I am grateful for you & the others here.

Kim Van Breda

Date: 10/25/2014 5:20:00 AM

Now I remember.... your poetic talents!!!! It's been awhile, but reading your work always inspires me to upgrade mine. You set a high bar Mr. Drake with this one. I love the line....."another didactic breath.. For your silky titanium retinas"-- the eye... both the mirror and reflection of the mind. My new book....has eye illustrations for both the front and back cover Xx~Xx

Poet Tacito
Date: 10/26/2014 11:10:00 PM

Hey, hey, Kim!!! It has certainly been awhile! I hope things are going good back in SA with the family?? Your words, per usual, strike such a positive chord with me. Thank you so much!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/21/2014 1:09:00 AM

Dropping by to say hi to a guy who is born to fly and that's no lie. Where have you been, I've looked and not seen, no new poems to read that's mean, we're ready and keen like an anxious teen. So grab your pen and write again your words are like a runaway train, slam us with exquisite pain soak us in metaphorical rain. On that note see ya later aligator.

Poet Tacito
Date: 10/24/2014 9:31:00 AM

You...you just floor me man. I'll have something posted soon enough. ;) I'm deeply grateful!

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/7/2014 10:31:00 PM

Embrace all that today offers ;) I have a silly grin on my face, dont ask me why lol. Me love that "caramel sunsets" line Drake. Absolutely enjoyed reading this!!

Wilma Neels
Date: 10/12/2014 9:57:00 AM

;) doing fabulous thanks Drake, how you? When I end up with a silly grin its a good thing :D

Poet Tacito
Date: 10/12/2014 9:29:00 AM

I'd love to know why, actually! Thank you so much, Wilma! I hope you're doing great! :D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/3/2014 5:04:00 PM

I am glad I read this today because today is the only day that I am sure to be able to read it. Perhaps you will comment tomorrow when tomorrow becomes today. I am getting so confused my head is going to explode!!! I enjoyed your poem Drake.

Poet Tacito
Date: 10/12/2014 9:28:00 AM

Fellow friend! :D Your comment amuses me so wonderfully! Thank you so much, Richard. I hope things are good with you! :D

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/8/2014 4:23:00 PM

Okay...LOVE.... this is... augh! I love it too much to have the right words to say. I'm usually good at thinking SOMETHING up, unless I am forced to speak it that is. Awesome piece here. I gottah quote these parts...very unique and memorable lines: "I, grip Rusty handle bars to ride Upon your caramel sunsets Sweetened with diabetic urges, Feening Feening" ---beyond sophisticated poetry, beyond passionate, and full of color! Seriously, why do I not come here more often? : ) Always. Laura

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/8/2014 5:12:00 PM

I don't know!!! lol But, you need to! I'm an awesome person to know, not just read! :D You rock, Laura. Seriously!!!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/5/2014 2:06:00 PM

Hey you! Sweet! Appealing! All we have is NOW! hugs

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/5/2014 2:34:00 PM

Agreed! :) Hi & thank you so much, Eileen!!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/5/2014 12:14:00 PM

the power of seizing the 'now' and cuddling the moment... my, another experiential piece,drake. thanks for coming by my page.. huggs

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/5/2014 12:18:00 PM

Yup, precisely! It's about time, my lady, Nette!!! :D You've been missed! It's great to see you again.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/5/2014 10:59:00 AM

At last.A poem from you,and what a poem.I don't know which line captured my thought most.From Egyptian cotton awakenings to Caramel.sunsets.From the promise in tomorrow,and the living for the moment of today.A favorite,of course.

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/5/2014 11:31:00 AM

:D, hi Charmaine. I am grateful for that. Very much so. Thank you for being here!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/5/2014 10:53:00 AM

Great poem Drake; You are so right - all we have is today. Funny, I was just thinking about you. Today I'm doing a little better. Thanks for the visit and have a blessed day... Lucilla

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/5/2014 10:57:00 AM

Excellent, very excellent to hear this, Lucilla! May it continue to progress!! Thank you so much! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/5/2014 10:24:00 AM

Drake my dear friend, your thunderbolts of poetry compete those of Zeus: Astonishing and awe provoking that no mere mortals could ever be able to appreciate all their splendor!

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/5/2014 10:38:00 AM

Super, super kind, Demetrios. Damn...am I man-blushing? I'm man-blushing!!!!!! :D