Into the Woods

Into the woods on a bright summers day
With a basket of food for her Grandma
But before she arrived she would pick a bouquet
A gift for her Grandma on this her birthday

She noticed the gamekeeper passing her by
So called out his name as she waved him goodbye
Normally friendly, but today Wolf looked down
As she saw on his face an embarrassing frown

She decided to check if her Granny was up
So she got out her mobile to call and checkup
She heard a strange voice but the signal was poor
Grandma’s voice was too deep, said she wanted to sleep
Maybe visit tomorrow for today she felt weak

This made her suspicious she started to shake
For her dear sweet Grandma should be baking a cake
She decided to call on her friend PC Blake
For her instinct was telling her something was wrong
as she called him to ask could he please come along

So together they wended their way through the wood
Nearing Grandma’s chalet, she removed her red hood
As they reached her front door, heard a voice shout for more
So perplexed and alarmed they went in fully armed

But imagine their shock, not believing their eyes
For Grandma was getting a birthday surprise
Grandma and Wolf stark-naked on the floor
Cavorting and frolicking, they were making amour

So discreetly they left, gently closing Grandma’s door…

8th January 2019
Competition: Into The Woods
Sponsor: Silent One
2nd placement

A different take on this ancient fairy tale...

Contest BRIAN STRAND YOU CHOOSE
Sponsor Brian Strand

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Date: 1/19/2019 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win,Ann, on a great descriptive and well written poem . :). Hugs Eve ~`*
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/19/2019 3:50:00 PM
So glad you liked it Eve and thanks for your congrats and hugs, kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/13/2019 10:18:00 AM
Great storytelling Ann.. Congrats on your placement in the contest..
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/14/2019 4:21:00 AM
Many thanks Silent One, I always enjoy entering your contests and thank you for my placement. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/13/2019 9:11:00 AM
Lol.. A surprise ending to be sure...Congrats on your win Ann..
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/14/2019 4:23:00 AM
Haha.. I hope it wasn't too saucy! So glad you enjoyed it and thank you so much for your congrats Joseph. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/13/2019 8:58:00 AM
Hi Ann, Great story telling. It was I reading little red riding retold by your skillful pen. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/14/2019 4:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis so glad you enjoyed my fairy tale! Thanks for your congrats and lovely comments, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/7/2019 8:18:00 PM
Ah, Ann, your imagination and your lovely sense of rhyming made this creation a fun poem to read for sure! Good luck in the contest, my friend.
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Date: 1/14/2019 4:27:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed my fairy tale Caren, hope the ending was not too saucy... Kindest thoughts my friend xx
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