Suzanne Delaney Poet Vogon Poetry

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Into the Vapenouz Woods of Voroznezh

"Has solitude ever led your steps down a forest path . . . "
                             Quote by Constance La France

Into the vapenouz woods of  Voroznezh
befooled by the curvenouzh, twistezh woodwayl
Wandered witlezh in frenzhied askewness
lozhing my witzh in a labyrzhthine mazhe 

Emergent in shzadoz a carnozhine Bedlamizh
gormlizh and gruezhome, ghazhtly and ghozhtly
mezhugga, wizhered, zhomewhat  confuzhed
Geozhationary, zhtrange, it zhtood in zhe way 

“I’m lozht,” I lamenzted in a zhin, zhaky voice
He bluzhtered and  dizhered in unuzhal  zhtyle
Zhen zhuprizhingly pointing in farzhical  pozhe
“Eazh- Veszh is zhe way to your fazhaway home. 

2.  Quote #2 - Inspiration with a theme of - Nature
WRITING CHALLENGE - ''V'' Forms Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
Written 11/16/22

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Gershon Wolf December 26, 2022 at 4:15 PM Ha, ha, ha! I actually know that place (and the half the words that go with it). It's in the Ukraine somewhere. lol. Suzanne Delaney December 26, 2022 at 5:01 PM Thanks Gershon…Lol yezth. My accent is zthowing. SuZ

Gary Radice December 12, 2022 at 1:41 AM I'm not sure if I should be worried or not because I understood it all - despite vogon poetry being the third worst in the universe. Mr J. B. Wocky would be proud SuZ. Cheers - Gary Suzanne Delaney December 12, 2022 at 6:03 AM Ha ha Wanting to be different sure leads you down unexpected pathways. Thanks for your welcome visit, Gary. SuZ

Gordon Mcconnell December 8, 2022 at 12:18 PM Lovely pen SuZ with nice imagery and expression penned. Blessings,Gordon Suzanne Delaney December 9, 2022 at 5:26 AM Thanks so much, Gordon: Your visit and comment are very appreciated. SuZ

Sara Kendrick December 4, 2022 at 2:47 AM Back with congratulations on your winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara Suzanne Delaney December 9, 2022 at 5:28 AM Thanks, Sara: I appreciate your Congrats. SuZ

Constance La France November 29, 2022 at 1:57 PM Suzanne, a very interesting form, I must try to write one. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge V Forms inspired by my quote, well done, blessings Suzanne Delaney December 4, 2022 at 7:58 AM Hi Constance: thank you for your kind words and my placement in your contest. I have escaped the winter to Siesta Key and not online much. Hope you try this form sometime…..it is another zone all together. Lol. SuZ

Suzette Richards November 23, 2022 at 9:49 PM I am back again to say Congratulations. It seems that we are the brave ones, lol. Suzanne Delaney December 4, 2022 at 8:00 AM I agree and I thought I had replied to your message, Su: We are back online but been busy settling into Siesta Key. LuV, SuZ

Harry Horsman November 20, 2022 at 11:33 PM This is all new to me. Suzanne, always willing to learn though, and yes so clever you are, on this creative poetry, and didn't need a looking glass neither. Love it. Suzanne Delaney December 4, 2022 at 7:55 AM Glad you enjoyed this one, Harry: My method for writing this was to get a wordlist of adjectives and basically alter them into a kind of Jabberwocky story. A fun exercise. Hope you’re well. SuZ

Suzette Richards November 17, 2022 at 11:43 PM Ztupendouslishes!!! Love your take on the form and had a good giggle. Good luck in the contest. :)) Suzanne Delaney November 18, 2022 at 3:42 AM Ha ha Suzette: Happy it gave you a good giggle. Thanks for the good luck wishes. I might need them. Lol SuZ

Hat Bueckert November 17, 2022 at 7:20 AM Zhimply fabulouzh Suzanne! I love this, Good luck to you in the contest! Suzanne Delaney November 17, 2022 at 5:14 PM Thanks Hat:Glad it gave you a moment of escape…lol SuZ

Charles Messina November 17, 2022 at 3:34 AM At first when I read it fast, I thought this was another unknown language to me (lol) After taking my time reading it a second time, it's written brilliantly, Suz. Love the story too! Best wishes in the contest...Charlie Suzanne Delaney November 17, 2022 at 5:51 AM Thanks Charlie: Once I got into the ‘zone,’ came fairly easily. I appreciate you reading and commenting. ..SuZ

Sara Kendrick November 17, 2022 at 12:51 AM Creative way to go. Reminds me of "The Big Bang Theory". Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Suzanne Delaney November 17, 2022 at 5:52 AM Thanks so much Sara, for your valued comment. Have a wonderful day. Hugs, SuZ

Andrea Dietrich November 16, 2022 at 1:06 PM I don't know anything about Vogon but to me this seemed like Little Red Riding Hood and the wolf!! Cool writing! Suzanne Delaney November 16, 2022 at 4:37 PM Thanks Andrea: Jabberwocky from Through the Looking Glass /Alice in Wonderland by Lewis Carrol, was one of the first word nonsense poems. Vogons, who are a fictional alien race from the planet Vogsphere in the Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy we’re the first one’s responsible for horrible poems. Try it. SuZ

L Milton Hankins November 16, 2022 at 10:03 AM Extra, extra fine writing, Suz. Not many of us can write convincing Vogon, but you certainly can! I thoroughly enjoyed reading and deciphering your lines. BofL in the contest. Suzanne Delaney November 16, 2022 at 10:32 AM I really appreciate these words, Milt, ….from someone as prolific as you are with writing poetry. I have always wanted to attempt a Jabberwocky style poem but this is my first time finishing one. No longer a VOGON virgin….LOL SuZ

Tom Cunningham November 16, 2022 at 8:47 AM Very creative Suz, you rose well to the challenge of the contest. Good luck. Tom Suzanne Delaney November 16, 2022 at 10:33 AM How lovely to get your comment today, Tom: ……always feels good to try a challenge and have fun with the outcome. Best, SuZ