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There was a time I was invisible, and empty, in naked truth exposed, my soul bare and stripped. Lost and unprotected, my pretty wings tattered and destroyed with feathers fallen, I was destitute without family or friends. Naked of emotions, a fading flame in the darkness, my heart stark and unsheathed all I knew was grief. I pushed everyone away, fell into concealment and weeping, bare of all emotions, save one- until I threw off my nakedness. I clawed my way back, uncovered my strength, dwelling within let my flame burn bright cast off despair and stepped back into life. ______________________________ November 12, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/Into The Unknown Copyright Protected, ID 16-849-421-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted into the contest, End of June 2018 Sponsor, Brian Strand First Place ____________________ Written for the contest, Naked sponsor, Anthony Slausen Eighth Place

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Date: 7/1/2018 3:54:00 PM
Great metamorphosis. Very inspirational. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/30/2018 5:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. As always, an awesome write, tugs at the heart and leaves us with hope. :)
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Date: 11/24/2016 8:16:00 PM
I am envious of your writing. You have a wonderful way to express your feelings.
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Date: 11/17/2016 10:24:00 AM
a splendid work visibly radiant, constance... big congrats on your fine spot!..huggs
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Date: 11/17/2016 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance!
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Date: 11/16/2016 9:30:00 PM
Lovely write with deeply felt emotions. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 11/16/2016 2:10:00 PM
Awesome write, Constance! Congrats!
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Date: 11/16/2016 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations, only those who have known pain, not felt pain but have lived with and known pain can truly understand joy
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Date: 11/16/2016 10:18:00 AM
This is really good Constance. Congrats.
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Date: 11/13/2016 3:01:00 PM
You are an inspiration. If you can come back after all that has happened, then there is hope for the rest of us. We have a lot to mourn in this life. So much is lost along the way.
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Date: 11/12/2016 12:41:00 PM
An exceptional poem Constance. You took me with on this introspection...a fav
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