Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Into the Sunlight

Walking into fading sunlight
The sun setting so slow
Brilliant color captivating
Like shore waves steady flow

Come walk with me my companion
Into the golden sunset
Let's enjoy our life's rich ending
Coated with no regrets

Let's enjoy each precious moment
Forgiving all mistakes
Look at that wonderful sunset
Filled with constant embrace

Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
Contest: Into The Sunset
Date written: 05-11-2014 
Theme: Sunsets

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Andy Richards May 26, 2014 at 1:19 PM I see this so vividly... nice!

Carolyn Devonshire May 17, 2014 at 2:21 PM Dear Sara, I love your approach to this contest, making the sunset the end of life's journey. Indeed, "Let's enjoy each precious moment." So beautiful, my friend. Congratulations on your win! Carolyn

Joseph May May 17, 2014 at 6:30 AM Well penned Sara...congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2014 at 11:01 PM this is sure nice, Sara. Can't believe I did not see it yet. Congrats to you.

Ivor Kos May 16, 2014 at 8:05 PM A true delight. So glad I've read this one today. Top-notch.

Faye Gibson May 16, 2014 at 3:42 PM Lovely, Sara. Congratulations!

Barbara Gorelick May 16, 2014 at 8:56 AM Sara, I think you will enjoy that wonderful sunset...I enjoyed your poem and was glad to see you win another..BG

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 16, 2014 at 5:41 AM Wow loved that constant embrace of sunset Sara! Great poem n so is the win , congrats !

Shadow Hamilton May 16, 2014 at 4:36 AM Sara love this poem its so full of life ty for your support congrats on win hugs

Faye Gibson May 13, 2014 at 1:38 PM Lovely picture and sentiments, Sara.

Richard Palmer May 13, 2014 at 6:48 AM wonderful write Sara,best wishes in the contest

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri May 11, 2014 at 11:56 PM A beautiful poem to enjoy nature and a breathtaking sunset that u described in lovely rhyme and sentence. Tc.

Robert Lindley May 11, 2014 at 11:53 PM HOLY COW! A truly wonderful contest entry. I mean fantastic.. Good luck my friend.

Brooke Dylan May 11, 2014 at 8:04 PM I love sunsets... I think they are so romantic... this is a beautiful read. so soothing ... hugs

Jack Horne May 11, 2014 at 6:16 PM beautiful write, my friend

Deborah Shiells May 11, 2014 at 5:18 PM Sara, My friend, This is simply sweet and precious and very Wonderfully expressed, every word. Just beautiful. Thanks for sharing and best of best wishes in the contest. Thanks for visiting me too:-) Peace, Deborah

Constance La France May 11, 2014 at 4:38 PM Sara, this is a lovely poem on sunsets, it felt so tranquil, best of luck in the contest

Nette Onclaud May 11, 2014 at 1:45 PM what a splendid melody, for the sunlight, sara... precious is the word.. huggs

Jeremy Street May 11, 2014 at 10:40 AM Like Walking Into Her Ocean, Sweet Beautiful Sara...Loving Her Kissing Her Caressing Her....Beautiful, And Happy Mother's Day...Love, Jeremy *

Robert Lindley May 11, 2014 at 10:21 AM Another true gem!! A pure delight reading your writes..

Anne-Lise Andresen May 11, 2014 at 8:53 AM - Romantic poetry Sara - Good luck in the contest!   - HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY TO YOU! -   (In Norway we celebrate Mother's Day in February) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 8:52 AM Such a beautiful poem..:) Happy Mother's Day Sara..:) love reading your writes..:)GBU,olive

Kim Morrison May 11, 2014 at 7:35 AM Beautiful work here Sara!