Into the Sun

Driving the car when the sun starts to sink
Is blindingly glaringly tough. 
You pull down the visor with Ray-Bans in place
But it really is never enough.

The traffic starts crawling and everyone brakes
‘Cause they can’t see the road up ahead,
So you stop and you start as you stare at a stream
Of the brake lights of cars gleaming red.

If you’re lucky a building will block out the rays
Or the sun will eventually set,
But it’s going to take you a much longer time
To arrive where you’re trying to get.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/27/2015 8:31:00 PM
Reminds me of driving I 70 going east thru the Rockies west of Denver in the morning. SCARY!
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Date: 4/25/2015 9:40:00 AM
This is very good indeed, Ilene.......shades of Gilbert and Sullivan (nicely rhythmic and excellent rhymes....)
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Date: 4/25/2015 12:10:00 AM
for sure. and I am glad I don't live in your big city, Ilene!! I prefer to be LYING in that sun!!!
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Date: 4/24/2015 11:26:00 PM
It really IS never enough. Great write and fun to read. Thank you for posting this.
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Date: 4/24/2015 10:12:00 PM
I have experienced this many times and it is so frustrating! Your descriptions are spot on, Ilene! Love, kim
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Date: 4/24/2015 8:50:00 PM
Your poem looks good. I think most everyone at one time or another has gone thru this situation. I like it!
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