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Into the night The pen or the knife Wine or cheesy reality Dancing with the devil Delectable choices Divine voices Inside my head Sadness mounts her horse Decisions and predilections The pen or the knife? Do I even have a choice?

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Date: 9/11/2016 9:02:00 PM
stream of consciousness technique, arthur... striking!..hugggs
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Date: 9/11/2016 1:39:00 PM
Grab a glass, pick up your pen - your writes are dark, never cheesy not like mine!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2016 1:06:00 PM
Well, with wine inside, the muse decides to speak.....don't you think?
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Date: 9/11/2016 8:39:00 AM
First slice up the cheese so we can enjoy it with the wine. We'll have a few laughs and then write about it.
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Date: 9/11/2016 7:35:00 AM
The pen is stronger than the sword anytime...In your case the Knife : ).
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Date: 9/11/2016 6:17:00 AM
- For some a difficult choice ...... deep and great written, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/11/2016 5:45:00 AM
Nice ... Either may do ... So no need of choice ... beautiful shadows ... half dark half light ... a brown-blue-pungent sight ...
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Date: 9/11/2016 3:11:00 AM
PLEASE....the pen. Need you around, my dear. Deep write....one I can really connect with. Hugs
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