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Into the Night

Into the night

The pen or the knife
Wine or cheesy reality
Dancing with the devil
Delectable choices
Divine voices
Inside my head
Sadness mounts her horse
Decisions and predilections
The pen or the knife?
Do I even have a choice?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 9:02 PM
stream of consciousness technique, arthur... striking!..hugggs
Allison Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 1:39 PM
Grab a glass, pick up your pen - your writes are dark, never cheesy not like mine!:-) hugs Jan xx
Murray Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Well, with wine inside, the muse decides to speak.....don't you think?
Smith Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 8:39 AM
First slice up the cheese so we can enjoy it with the wine. We'll have a few laughs and then write about it.
Chircop Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 7:35 AM
The pen is stronger than the sword anytime...In your case the Knife : ).
Andresen Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 6:17 AM
- For some a difficult choice ...... deep and great written, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 5:45 AM
Nice ... Either may do ... So no need of choice ... beautiful shadows ... half dark half light ... a brown-blue-pungent sight ...
Manassian Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 3:11 AM
PLEASE....the pen. Need you around, my dear. Deep write....one I can really connect with. Hugs
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