Into the Night

Phantom images that hie into the night,
cross paths of uncertainty with little light.
Under the lamp flame two souls meet,
spindly arms embrace in a love retreat.
 
Into the night with the lights out,
silhouettes two bodies fully devout.
One will stay; other must leave,
full of love they both will grieve.

A juvenile love so intensely pure,
will have to wait till they mature.
Hearts will long and maybe break,
time will pass and adults will wake.

Into the night two hearts slowly divide-
vowing to return and wed groom and bride.

Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 9/28/2010 12:27:00 PM
Hi Caryl Liked this ,brought back memories.Young love eh? Very sweet gentle poem a little sad but quite moving. Thankyou for your comment on my bee.As far as I can understand bees can get high on nectar(slight case of o.d) This one needed to sleep it off-have a kip. Luv June
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Date: 9/17/2010 12:48:00 PM
This is a beautiful sonnet. I love the line "under the lamp flame to souls meet". Take care, -Mike
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Date: 9/12/2010 5:50:00 PM
Nicely worded and nicely rhymed sonnet on Into the night, Caryl
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Date: 9/12/2010 2:43:00 PM
Wonderful Sonnet, Caryl. Beautiful too! Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/12/2010 1:43:00 PM
HI, Caryl, saw that you wrote a sonnet and was happy to see that. We need more sonnets here at Soup!! A great topic for this sonnet too. LUv, Andrea
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