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Into the light

Into the light she escaped before she died – the naughty moth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 9/11/2014 9:14:00 AM
I send this with love...not criticism, A true, traditional, Japanese Haiku is 3 sets of 3 lines as I mentioned. the first line is 5 syllables, the second line is 7, and the third line is 5. Or perhaps you are writing in a style of Haiku unknown to me?? I love to learn new things. But your poetry is beautiful and speaks to me. "the naughty moth". Trish
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Date: 9/11/2014 9:11:00 AM
Love, love this one!!!! A Haiku soul-mate! LOL Trish
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Date: 3/24/2014 3:24:00 AM
Old traditional concept still said in a beautiful way. Nice.!
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