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Into the Grass

Fresh and green grass farm
Maiden walks freely at glance
Footstep in cow's dung
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Marie Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 3:45 PM
A sweet, humorous Haiku with imagery also evoking "scent"..lol Great writing. blessings, lynn
Gasun Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 3:46 AM
Coming back to warmly Congratulate you on your win my very dear friend, Aiyah and to once again enjoy this wonderful winning piece of yours. Thank you, thank you so much. Many hugs and cheers! How are you? Hope you're doing well. I'm praying for you always. I'm also fervently praying that there will be no earthquake to visit our country. Tcare always. love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 8:25 PM
glad to see this one again! Congrats.
A  Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 1:27 PM
Aiyah, Congrats on your win. SKAT
Carter Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 8:16 AM
Congrats on your chuckle hiku win Aiyah! ~lee
A. Sharma Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 10:38 PM
Oh thats a brilliant take Aiyah!Congrats on big win!
A   Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 2:40 PM
LOL, I bet this happens a lot. Aiyah :), Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my giggle haiku contest. I enjoyed reading every entry placed on the winning list. Stop by my latest blog "MY CAT" if you'd like or have the time. Yours Truly! ~LINDA~
Devnath  Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 8:22 PM
Dear lovely friend, how are you? Nice scene beautifully pictured. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Onclaud Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 2:47 PM
a most remarkable 'ku; the ending was a punchline, aiyah... i like how this was well done.. wow talaga ang mga pinay!..how are you?.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 8:44 AM
- Pops up on your side, dear friend Aiyah .... as a rabbit .... to say: HAPPY EASTER !!!! - big hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 12:12 PM
Aiyah, yuk that would be terrible but sadly happens all the time when walking on the farm, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, my cat . . .
Gasun Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 11:56 AM
Aweee!!! This is a great limerick my very dear friend, Aiyah! I can relate here :)))))). Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your kind visit on my poem. I am so sorry for the very late expression of gratitude because I was super busy at school. I'm having a day off starting tom. up to Sun. Seems not enough break for me esp that I brought home some assignments, but at least, I'll have more time to drop by here! Miss you, too! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
Callus Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 7:04 AM
She was doing just fine, until she took the wrong step! Thanks for the smile:) // paul
Tidd Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 11:42 AM
Cute.
Nunez Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 6:32 PM
hahah!....mas makulet! love it kabayan!
Andresen Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 7:56 AM
- Happy Sunday, dear Aiyah !! :))
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 6:26 PM
reminds me a bit of mine, except mine was grosser!!! Me likes.
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 12:43 PM
yayyy, aiyah... love the last line.. galing naman.. huggs
Torres Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 9:46 AM
hehe .. thanks a lot !!! magaling ang aking musa :")
Allison Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 10:29 AM
ha ha ha:-) great one a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
Torres Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 9:46 AM
Thanks Jan :"))
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 9:51 AM
- Well done my friend Aiyah :)))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Torres Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 10:03 AM
thanks a lot my dear friend, Anne Lise :"))
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