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Into the Gloaming

Beneath the weeping willow A gentle figure swings Her dress of white a-billow While soft and sweet she sings She sang within this bower What song I cannot tell Her hair bedecked with flowers Blue Canterbury bells And on into the gloaming Is heard this pleasant sound When stars begin their roaming She lets her hair unbound Then o'er her form the willow weeps The night is still -- the child sleeps

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/9/2013 7:46:00 PM
congrats................SKAT
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Date: 8/9/2013 10:59:00 AM
Ahh!! Great poetic quality..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/9/2013 9:13:00 AM
very nice write Isaiah....congrats on your win
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Date: 8/9/2013 6:55:00 AM
Well done Isaiah! Congratulations.
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Date: 8/9/2013 1:16:00 AM
this is a haunting beauty of a poem! You did the word gloaming proud!!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/8/2013 9:51:00 PM
Isaiah, a nice win...PD
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Date: 8/7/2013 4:06:00 PM
I have to favour this beauty..I guess being so close to nature inspires you so beautifully and romance is scenting the air with wafting fragrance -Charma
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Date: 7/29/2013 9:52:00 PM
Wow, I agree with Ilene..please send whatever it is that your imbibing tonight. Another lovely piece. I love it all, but the last couplet is so sweet. BG
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Date: 7/29/2013 7:52:00 PM
wow! you are on a roll tonight. that's two for two - i love this one, too!
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