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Into the Blue


Pain faded into the blue
purplish clots
pooling beneath welted skin

interstitial fluids coalescing,
coagulating, collecting
swallowed tears.

Day had broken the grasp
opened the ever-locked door
taunted the terrified

incited the torment
of acquiescence -
silenced  anger.

No locks barred open doors
chains hobbled only memory,
fear’s straight jacket unbuckled.

The blue faded, hidden beneath
old lies, blanketed in the warmth
of more colorful promises

Destined to fade
into the blue
of pain.


John G. Lawless
1/12/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/25/2016 1:01:00 PM
My senses in totality are in awe of your wonderful lines. Liquefied bliss from the boil of glorious words has brought out enchanting aroma beyond scaling. 7 is simply an underscore for this fine share.
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Date: 1/13/2016 5:56:00 PM
heartfelt write John..it's great...
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John Lawless
Date: 1/16/2016 9:15:00 AM
Thanks again for stopping to read and comment
Date: 1/13/2016 1:22:00 PM
packed with emotion and imagery, john... enjoyed this vivid, strong write.. huggs
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John Lawless
Date: 1/16/2016 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Nette, always nice to hear from you

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