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Into the blue

Into the blue





dark clouds evanesce
as eyes stare into the blue
ecstasy shimmers ....

serene ocean depths
awaiting reconnaissance 
undulate their throbs ....



Written Jan 13th, 2016
For contest by Anthony Slausen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/14/2016 4:33:00 PM
Dear Upma Excellent job on this sweet poem on the ocean blue, love the depth of feeling you've expressed here my friend, enjoyed the read, and thanks for your review on my poem also, take care and you have a great upcoming weekend, cheri
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Date: 1/14/2016 4:28:00 PM
Good luck first. Beautiful poem read from you. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 1/14/2016 1:28:00 PM
OH, this is stunningly beautiful Dr. Sharma! I hope it gets the attention it deserves! #7 I loved it and am fav'ing it!
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Date: 1/14/2016 7:34:00 AM
very cool...
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Date: 1/14/2016 1:31:00 AM
A lovely HAIKU set... beautiful language and imagery. Well done! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/13/2016 10:21:00 AM
absolutely beautiful!
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Date: 1/13/2016 8:40:00 AM
Upma, your lovely lines bring nature to life. Janice
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