Into the Blue

Into the blue





dark clouds evanesce
as eyes stare into the blue
ecstasy shimmers ....

serene ocean depths
awaiting reconnaissance 
undulate their throbs ....



Written Jan 13th, 2016
For contest by Anthony Slausen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dunn Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Dear Upma Excellent job on this sweet poem on the ocean blue, love the depth of feeling you've expressed here my friend, enjoyed the read, and thanks for your review on my poem also, take care and you have a great upcoming weekend, cheri
Devnath  Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 4:28 PM
Good luck first. Beautiful poem read from you. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 1:28 PM
OH, this is stunningly beautiful Dr. Sharma! I hope it gets the attention it deserves! #7 I loved it and am fav'ing it!
Legend Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 7:34 AM
very cool...
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 1:31 AM
A lovely HAIKU set... beautiful language and imagery. Well done! Best wishes, Keith
George   Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:21 AM
absolutely beautiful!
Canerdy Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Upma, your lovely lines bring nature to life. Janice
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