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Into the Blue

Into the Blue Into the heartbeat of the blue sea of crystal glass Never calm, but constantly moving rippling water Truly mysterious in its grandeur surpass beauty Obedient to unimaginable fathoms depth ~ Thirsty for the kiss of helpless sandy shores the waves drift on Her heavenly breast with luscious relaxing sounds and Endless scent of the briny cool breeze ~ Blue sea merges into the rising blue horizon Liquescent sunset of dissolving view closes the day Under the shadow of the drifting shapeless clouds Effortlessly inviting twilight completing the dark blue night
1/11/2016
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Caliri Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 10:40 AM
I love the rushing pace of this piece...and "liquescent sunset." And thanks for placing me in your rainbow contest!
A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:52 PM
Eve, congrats on your fine win. XOX - LINDA -
A  Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Eve, Congrats on your Into The Blue win. ** SKAT **
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Beautiful Acrostic, Eve! Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 7:05 PM
Eve, beautiful poem for a contest winner..congrats!! *smiles*
Leiser Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Masterfully written, Eve :)
Boddie Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 3:42 PM
this makes me want to swim....through the brightest joy and even the darkest grim....you Beautify words, no matter what the scene....that's why I was so delighted when I first saw these words upon my screen....magnificent eve....;)
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 5:55 PM
Awe :) thank you so much dear friend another smile. You are so very kind Eric.
Sage Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 3:30 AM
Beautiful write Eve
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:12 AM
Thank you, W.S., :)
Onclaud Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 2:34 AM
beautiful take on the theme, eve... nothing compared to my entry.. love the flow of your energy!..huggs
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:11 AM
That is an honor :) thank you, Nette :) Your work is always so beautiful
May Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 10:55 PM
Beautiful write Eve, ... 7.... best wishes in the contest..
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:10 AM
Thank you, Joseph, for the 7 and the good luck !:)
Vaso Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 9:41 PM
I liked what you did with this, very "deep" :)
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Thank you dear friend for constantly supporting me my guardian angel :)
Scars Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 9:25 PM
Wow, very creative and clever for the contest Eve! a wonderful write as always *smiles*
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Thank you, Laura, Hugs sweet friend
Allison Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 5:19 PM
Such beautiful imagery and personification Eve - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Thank you sweet friend :) Hugs Eve
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