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Into the Blue Into the heartbeat of the blue sea of crystal glass Never calm, but constantly moving rippling water Truly mysterious in its grandeur surpass beauty Obedient to unimaginable fathoms depth ~ Thirsty for the kiss of helpless sandy shores the waves drift on Her heavenly breast with luscious relaxing sounds and Endless scent of the briny cool breeze ~ Blue sea merges into the rising blue horizon Liquescent sunset of dissolving view closes the day Under the shadow of the drifting shapeless clouds Effortlessly inviting twilight completing the dark blue night
1/11/2016

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Date: 1/27/2016 10:40:00 AM
I love the rushing pace of this piece...and "liquescent sunset." And thanks for placing me in your rainbow contest!
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Date: 1/26/2016 9:52:00 PM
Eve, congrats on your fine win. XOX - LINDA -
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Date: 1/14/2016 9:18:00 PM
Eve, Congrats on your Into The Blue win. ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/14/2016 7:40:00 PM
Beautiful Acrostic, Eve! Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/14/2016 7:05:00 PM
Eve, beautiful poem for a contest winner..congrats!! *smiles*
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Date: 1/12/2016 6:37:00 PM
Masterfully written, Eve :)
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Date: 1/12/2016 3:42:00 PM
this makes me want to swim....through the brightest joy and even the darkest grim....you Beautify words, no matter what the scene....that's why I was so delighted when I first saw these words upon my screen....magnificent eve....;)
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Date: 1/12/2016 5:55:00 PM
Awe :) thank you so much dear friend another smile. You are so very kind Eric.
Date: 1/12/2016 3:30:00 AM
Beautiful write Eve
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:12:00 AM
Thank you, W.S., :)
Date: 1/12/2016 2:34:00 AM
beautiful take on the theme, eve... nothing compared to my entry.. love the flow of your energy!..huggs
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 11:11:00 AM
That is an honor :) thank you, Nette :) Your work is always so beautiful
Date: 1/11/2016 10:55:00 PM
Beautiful write Eve, ... 7.... best wishes in the contest..
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 11:10:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph, for the 7 and the good luck !:)
Date: 1/11/2016 9:41:00 PM
I liked what you did with this, very "deep" :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 11:09:00 AM
Thank you dear friend for constantly supporting me my guardian angel :)
Date: 1/11/2016 9:25:00 PM
Wow, very creative and clever for the contest Eve! a wonderful write as always *smiles*
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thank you, Laura, Hugs sweet friend
Date: 1/11/2016 5:19:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery and personification Eve - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thank you sweet friend :) Hugs Eve

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