into night's refrain

into night's refrain flavored sighs stroke mound of lips -- weaving sweet passion

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/24/2025 5:40:00 PM

Nette, the more I read your work, the more I understand how you see the world. It is really wonderful to sense you have a romantic heart. It makes life quite pleasurable. I am a happily married man and get to have this experience continually. Life can be wonderful for some of us!!! Smiles!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/23/2025 4:16:00 PM

Whoa!! Passionate lines penned. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Len Gasun

Date: 2/7/2025 7:43:00 AM

Gorgeously romantic my dear poet friend and sis, Nette! I love it a lot and immensely enjoyed. A great winning piece. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your poetry. Many hugs from me. Good night.

Paige Hind

Date: 2/6/2025 9:14:00 PM

Beautiful! <3 What a senryu

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/6/2025 11:32:00 AM

Hello Nette, this is a very passionate poem .So romantic. Hugs. /Darlene/