Into My Dream

I dreamt, I was a butterfly or was I, a butterfly dreaming . . .
     Peacefully detained by a delightful young gent,
Lying in green mead where buttercups were beaming;
     Releasing an enchanting aromatic scent.

Peacefully detained by a delightful young gent,
     His fascinating smile lured me in my slow stride,
Releasing an enchanting aromatic scent;
     Where enrapturing view overtook me inside.

His fascinating smile lured me in my slow stride,
     Entrancing flitter hypnotized to restful sleep, 
Where enrapturing view overtook me inside;
     When into my captivating dream he did seep.

Entrancing flitter hypnotized to restful sleep,
     There he envisioned I was his true love to be,
When into my captivating dream he did seep;
     Making a woman without wings to set me free.

There he envisioned I was his true love to be,
     Lying in green mead where buttercups were beaming,
Making a woman without wings to set me free;
     I dreamt, I was a butterfly or was I, a butterfly dreaming . . .

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

July 9, 2011

Third Place Winner ~ "Daydreams and dreams and dreams” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France~ A Rambling Poet
Aug. 5, 2011
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Brown Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 7:43 AM
Congratulations Caryl on your win in the contest of Constance La France "Day Dreams and dreams and dreams" Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 9:43 PM
Such an enchanting write Carly. Many congrats for this win.
George   Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 8:09 PM
Beautiful Caryl. Many congrats on your super win, Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 6:10 PM
Congrats Caryl on your terrific third place win for this first class poetry ... beautiful daydreaming luv..
Mehta Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 5:53 PM
My congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Caryl
Roberts Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 11:48 AM
just beautiful Caryl
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