Into Eternity

If I were but a stone and you were a peach
Would you stay on your branch totally out of reach?

If I were a dandelion and you were the wind 
Would you help me spread my seeds, be my dearest friend?

If I were but a seedling struggling for life in the snow
Would you be the winter sun and shine to help me grow?

Babe when I was so stoned I was totally out of reach
You offered me your heart, the sweetness of the peach

Babe when I was an evil man spreading seeds in the wind
You saw the good in me and became my dearest friend

Babe when my soul was black as night my heart as cold as snow
You opened up my heart and soul then taught them how to grow

And now just look and you and I the couple that we are
Just a couple of happy quasars shining like a single star 

So never think in your life that I would ever go away
I will be right at your side until we reach our dying day

If I had but a single wish sweetheart that wish would be
Let us be in each other’s arms as we step into eternity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/28/2008 5:52:00 PM
Ver beautiful poem. Also thank you for your kind words regarding mine....Matt
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Date: 12/28/2008 12:06:00 PM
i only have one word to sum up my feelings about this poem...PERFECT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 12/26/2008 10:08:00 PM
A beautiful piece of your heart written in tribute to your wife, with love as fine as this you and her will succeed now and beyond,,,Thank you for your wonderful words you left behind on my poem,,and merry Christmas and happy New Year,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 12/26/2008 11:04:00 AM
What a very beautiful poem you wrote for your wife, the love just shines through this brilliantly. God bless and thanks for the congrats, it was very appreciated. Hope you all had a wonderful holiday! :) Amy
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Date: 12/25/2008 12:58:00 AM
LOVELY!!! May you stay close together forever =D thank you for the warm comments...tc of yourself and your wife...Sara...
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Date: 12/24/2008 8:44:00 PM
Now that is beautiful bro..It is a heart rendering one to the max...The depth of feelings is oh so sweet..thanks for sharing...and thanks for your comment on those shorties of mine...have a Safe and Happy Holiday..Lawrence in Lou.
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Date: 12/24/2008 7:15:00 PM
Sweep into eternity.....perfect....wonderful...and so touchy!! All the time your love grows and everytime its another great wonder to read your love poems dedicated to your wife. Keep this love growing!! Wishing you, her and all yours a beautiful and blessed Christmas. Love, Chitra
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Date: 12/23/2008 6:11:00 PM
Wow Michael what a lovely romantic piece you wrote for your wife! She's a happy woman I'm sure in the arms of such a man! I love your use of nature in this write! Ever lasting love flows from your heart. Merry Christmas Laura :)
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Date: 12/23/2008 6:06:00 PM
What a lovely Christmas gift to give your lovely wife! There is nothing else that could top a gift like these words. Merry Christmas Michael, my neighbor. A rainy Christmas on hand, says the weather man,......but the warmth in your heart will keep your lady snug! God Bless...Carrie
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Date: 12/23/2008 4:20:00 PM
Beautiful Michael! What loving sentiment. Your happiness is the fruit of your labors! Thank you for your thoughtful comments. Merry Christmas to you and yours! Love Robin
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Date: 12/23/2008 12:33:00 PM
"Very Beautiful~My Talented & Beautiful Friend!"~"Love, " the gift from above! And you penned it so well "Michael Jordan!"~I have seen a lot of this love for your wife lately within many of your writings~what a wonderful and "Godly" thing this is! And this write flowed with tenderness, sincerety and loveliness through and thriugh! So, may all your wishes within it someday come true! And, "Merry Christmas To You Brother~And ~All Of Those Whom Your Heart Loves, Always With Love To You, John!":)
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Date: 12/23/2008 10:05:00 AM
great poem. im glad i came across this one
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Date: 12/23/2008 9:55:00 AM
Michael this is absolutely gorgeous, amazing. Your love is so pure and beautiful to read about. This was a perfect write, I hope you shared this with her, because it's just so beautiful :) Blessings ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/23/2008 8:09:00 AM
this is beautiful, may God continue to bless your lives greatly, as the greatest love comes from him, I know you will step into eternity in each others arms just like me and my Josh, what God has brought together nothing can take apart not anything at all God bless you from diane have a great christmas and new year.
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Date: 12/23/2008 6:50:00 AM
Boy what a tear jerker. Very moving and heartfelt. Every couple needs to read this one...Awesome Write.
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Date: 12/23/2008 5:44:00 AM
Each and every time you write a love and devotion poem to your wife, I am in awe at how it is even more beautiful than the last. A 'shining single star' is just a most precious visual and depth of feeling. You are truly a poet Michael, and so much more. Your capacity for love is overflowing, and that is such a rare and glorious gift. May you both shine together, forever. Merry Christmas my friend. Love you, shar
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Date: 12/23/2008 4:02:00 AM
Dearest Michael, An expression of love that comes straight from your heart and touches another as only you can. Warmest wishes to you and your family. love, Lainie
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Date: 12/23/2008 3:45:00 AM
Beaautiful, Mike. Merry Christmas. May the good life continue through life. Love, daver
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Date: 12/23/2008 3:07:00 AM
Michael, this is awesome.....you have such a gift of explanation of your feelings.....this one will go into my fav, and you my friend, are one of my dearest friends.......Merry Christmas to you, and your precious family....always, Christy.....I know you have been enjoying your son being home.....give him my love...always, Christy
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