Nette Onclaud Poet Haiku

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Charles Messina's Charlieku 4 x 3 x 4' Contest

Into Breaths Of Calm -- CM

Sip slow a breath
With each rhymed depth
While stillness heaves

And clouds trail by
Till hymn of light
Glows through winged night--

Then let the hush
Meet heart its gush
Oh... new world wakes

On crest of calm
Life’s pour...aplomb
Like froth-dewed balm !

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Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2026 at 8:59 PM This is fabulous!

Paige Hind April 29, 2026 at 10:48 PM lovely haikus <3

Karen Jones April 29, 2026 at 12:50 AM A beautiful write! Love the calm serene tone and energy!

Paula Goldsmith April 28, 2026 at 10:19 AM I enjoyed reading your lovely "Into Breaths Of Calm -- CM" write. "Good Luck" I did, "What Is A Mother's Love? - CM." Have a lovely day writing away............

Daniel Henry Rodgers April 28, 2026 at 7:38 AM Dear Nette, I love how you move from hush to lift, from cloud-drift to that soft “new world wakes,” as if dawn itself is stretching its shoulders. A small poem, but it leaves a calm sense of being. Amen! Blessings, Daniel