Into a Warm Night

I remember each curve,
nodding in quiet response 
moving towards me, as you walked across the floor
each finger lifting gently to caress the welcomed silence
when eyes danced in unison in motionless space
when need and want became two hands
tethered without fear, in candle's light
as the soft trembles of a saxophone
whispered in the background

Upon the wall, flickering light painted a silhouette
shadow upon shadow, before the eyes closed
leaving the world of sight, into a world of senses
cool breezes from windows quenched the thirst
from the sweat of our palms
we danced without care or restraint
wrapped in sheltered arms of love
as the world disappeared into a warm night
from melted candles and empty glasses

9/21/16
contest Free Verse Love Poem-2
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Barden Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 12:55 AM
Congrats on another win with this gem, Frederic - wonderful! :-)
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April 9, 2018 at 11:30 PM
Beautiful! Wonderful penning Frederick, congratulations on a fine win! xomo!
Gentry Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 10:51 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful and romantic poem.
Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Very sensuous. Lovely, Frederic. Congrats on your podium win.
Barden Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 12:20 AM
Thoughtfully and creatively penned ... congrats, my friend! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:46 PM
Lovely, Frederick! Congrats!
Hamilton Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:37 PM
I thought I recognized this one, but couldn't recall who it was but I knew it was a great poem. Well done Frederick and congrats on solo #2.
Hamilton Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 9:36 AM
This is such a romantic poem. Reminds me of a recent write of mine, dancing in the moonlight, although I think yours is better!
Bangani Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Congradulations on winning,awesome poem
Jones Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 10:01 PM
ooo la la that's a love poem....awesome
Trotter Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 11:24 PM
Really lovely....
Onclaud Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 11:04 PM
how soft is the mood of your work, fredrick.. my best congrats!... huggs
Scars Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Frederic, sooooooo romantic and beautiful dear man...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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September 22, 2016 at 8:25 PM
Back with congratulations! Agnes
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 3:09 PM
WOW, this is fantastic, Frederic. I just love the atmosphere you created with this. FAVE
Krampe Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Lovely and romantic, well done, Frederic. Good luck for the contest. Agnes
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