Intimate Temptation

Half a year,
Half a red glass.
A shot of guts,
And a tempting glance.
A pretending touch,
and an out of the world clasp.

Dont want to unhand,
I want to hold on,
And never let go.

Second to none is yet to come,
The light on the road I was blind to see,
Yet he managed to master the scene. 
Next flows the water and the spirit of lust,
Perilous, Hazardous, life - threatening risk,
Devotion of an imperceptible guilt.

I think at that moment I've lost my heart to him.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 8:24 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 10:57 PM
DAYANA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
Babu Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 4:49 AM
NICE WORK............
Mehta Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 1:53 PM
This is well penned creative write with lovely expressions , Dayana
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