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Intimate Temptation

Half a year, Half a red glass. A shot of guts, And a tempting glance. A pretending touch, and an out of the world clasp. Dont want to unhand, I want to hold on, And never let go. Second to none is yet to come, The light on the road I was blind to see, Yet he managed to master the scene. Next flows the water and the spirit of lust, Perilous, Hazardous, life - threatening risk, Devotion of an imperceptible guilt. I think at that moment I've lost my heart to him.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/29/2025 8:24:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/23/2016 10:57:00 PM
DAYANA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 8/24/2013 4:49:00 AM
NICE WORK............
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Date: 8/3/2011 1:53:00 PM
This is well penned creative write with lovely expressions , Dayana
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